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jaimej
11-10-2006, 15:46
these are my first attempt with a 35mm camera and a black and white film. I submitted them to my college on Friday, I am still awaiting results:shrug: [/img] http://www.talkphotography.co.uk/gallery/data/500/medium/chrysanthemum_with_shadow.jpg http://www.talkphotography.co.uk/gallery/data/500/medium/b_w_chrysanthemum.jpg img]http://www.talkphotography.co.uk/gallery/data/500/medium/b_w_flower.jpg[/img] http://www.talkphotography.co.uk/gallery/data/500/medium/plant_leaves.jpg http://www.talkphotography.co.uk/gallery/data/500/medium/white_flowers.jpg http://www.talkphotography.co.uk/gallery/data/500/leaf1.jpg

Constructive critiscism welcome and appreciated, thanks:)
h.r.ford
12-10-2006, 06:14
the composition is great on these. All the white flowers would be a great pic but the highlights have blown. I would drop it down a stop or two and try again. I like the last leaf but it might be too shallow a dof. But that is completely subjective and I don't think it can be faulted for any other reason.

Renee
jaimej
12-10-2006, 16:52
Thanks, got my results today and got an a so well pleased. I agree with your comments though, thanks again.
h.r.ford
13-10-2006, 06:32
Congrats on the A!
Stratosfear
13-10-2006, 08:29
Hi, just one thing I can see wrong, slight dust on the ccd or film..........I love the composure of the shots, well done.
matty
13-10-2006, 17:08
i like these, pretty good but a little dark?
jaimej
13-10-2006, 20:22
Hi, just one thing I can see wrong, slight dust on the ccd or film..........I love the composure of the shots, well done.

:) yeah my negs were a bit dusty and the scanner was even worse, will have to sort it and rescan. Thanks for the comments everyone. x:D (this was me when I got my A)