Mariye [Archive] - Talk Photography

ftmftm

12-11-2006, 22:13

here are somemore of Mariye. Thanks David

1 http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i267/ftmftm1/6.jpg

2 http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i267/ftmftm1/2.jpg

3 http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i267/ftmftm1/1.jpg

..MD..

12-11-2006, 22:18

again ftmftm some nice shots i like the lighting myself some nice captures:thumbs:

Marcel

13-11-2006, 09:39

Again, nice shots.
Lighting and poses are great in 1 and 3. Not too sure about the pose in 2, she looks a little strained? I think the line of her top being quite clean cut doesn't help. If I was to give critique, then I would point out the cut off arm in #1 and the missing arm in #3 (I didnt spot it at first...but now I have..lol)

Number 1 I think is my fave though, she seems very relaxed. Very natural looking shot.

Arkady

13-11-2006, 15:35

Ummm... I think the lighting's very two-dimensional - the balanced output from both lights doesn't really give much depth to the subject.
Try dialling your fill-light about two-thirds back and moving it about half a metre lower.

ftmftm

14-11-2006, 00:37

Ummm... I think the lighting's very two-dimensional - the balanced output from both lights doesn't really give much depth to the subject.
Try dialling your fill-light about two-thirds back and moving it about half a metre lower.

thanks for the advice. i will try that next time. David