a few pictures

[ftmftm]

here are a few pictures ive done over the last couple of days. Thanks David

1 http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i267/ftmftm1/dan.jpg

2 http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i267/ftmftm1/sarah22.jpg

3 http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i267/ftmftm1/laura2.jpg

[Venomator]

These are all pretty good in their own way David ... I particularly like #1 as you have excellent eye contact and DoF ... a great range of colours and a relaxed an interesting subject ... :thumbs:

Not too sure about the treatment in #2 ... :shrug:

And #3 looks just a little awkward although again you have great eye contact and excellent detail in the pic ... all imo of course ... ;)

TFS ... :D







:p

[petemc]

I can't help feel that theres something wrong with 3. The bra strap isn't exactly flattering, and I'm not 100% sure on the angle. If I am to be honest her cleavage takes focus from her face and she nice eyes . I'd crop her cleavage out tbh, just a small hint would work better.

[Marik]

or crop the head off and keep the cleavage..

[ftmftm]

I can't help feel that theres something wrong with 3. The bra strap isn't exactly flattering, and I'm not 100% sure on the angle. If I am to be honest her cleavage takes focus from her face and she nice eyes . I'd crop her cleavage out tbh, just a small hint would work better.

here one cropped.

http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i267/ftmftm1/laura22.jpg

[Marik]

noooo :(

lovely shots btw mate well impressed :)

(show me the cleavage!)

[Venomator]

Much better ... still shame about the wayward strap/s though ... ;)






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[ftmftm]

noooo :(

lovely shots btw mate well impressed :)

(show me the cleavage!)

thanks Manrik, here is a very quick edit of one of the bra straps taken out


http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i267/ftmftm1/laura222-1.jpg

[petemc]

The bra strap removal does look much better. There does appear to be something between her norks though. Some black object which doesn't really add to the shot.

[matty]

edits are much better, i dont like #2 though, something not right there

[InaGlo]

Not much that I can see wrong with no1 though it doesnt do much for me.

Im not keen on no2, it looks over sharpened/blown highlights.

No3 ... very attractive model in a not so attractive pose!
For me, its not the cleavage that detracts from the image, its the whole pose with the hunched shoulders, they look disproportionate & they are what take over.
The model has a gorgeous mouth and lovely eyes ... hope you get to shoot her again, Id like to see more of her.

[fingerz]

or crop the head off and keep the cleavage..

:lol:

[lee]

3 looks good but I would get her to blow a rasberry (as recommended by Arkardy) and smile, even slightly would make a big difference to me as her face just lacks expression. IMO

[Ally]

I really like the first one, it looks theirs a backlight behind your subject.

[Arkady]

I still think the lighting's too flat. Try moving one (the fill-light) further round to one side and decreasing the output. These are lit like passport photos.