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ford1
29-11-2006, 15:45
hello again i took these for a car club i belong to i like them a lot but think i might be able to improve on them .thanks in advance for your help

kevin


http://i29.photobucket.com/albums/c288/fordcrazy_/Picture444-1.jpg

fingerz
29-11-2006, 15:46
Few steps to the left and a lower angle would've meant you just had cars, grass and sky, as opposed to cars, grass, sky, lamp posts, a bit of tree in front of a house and some view into the distance.

Venomator
29-11-2006, 15:48
No bad effort there Ford1 ... imo ... could do without the building/trees left of frame ... and lose a bit of grass & sky to emphasise the motors perhaps ... :thinking:

I'm no motor fotor wiz ... but there are some keen guys here will no doubt give you far better pointers ... :thumbs:





:p

namllihs
29-11-2006, 16:07
Get in close an low.

Joe T
30-11-2006, 12:30
Its not a bad shot by any means, but:

1. Clone out the dust speck

2. Try to shoot without distracting objects in the background - these could actualy be cloned out - just make sure you get the colours right.

3. Get in lower - if the centre-line of the cars was two-thirds of the way down the frame this would look better - this would also remove the boring green grass in the foreground.

4. Maybe try shooting at a different time of day - possibly around sunrise or sunset - this will give far more interesting light - and may make the sky more interesting too.

Its still not a bad shot. The angle of the cars is good, and the blue sky is very nice. :)

ford1
30-11-2006, 13:18
thankyou

the guy with the red car is down this weekend so il take your comments on board and post another pic up soon

kev

scoff
03-12-2006, 09:47
Kev, touch up the Streetfighter bumper, as always they get battered on the leading edge...
Nice shot, and you have some pointers to work on! :)

Dal
03-12-2006, 16:47
its a good shot that kev, defo take the shot alot lower down though. i quite often end up laying down when taking photo's of cars as it gives them a more over powering effect.

with the sunsets you've been getting aswell try taking one around that time so you get some good lighting effects.

DoubleT
03-12-2006, 19:45
thats a good shot, but as said , its nice to get down quite low..

ok this wasnt taken at a low angle but its still a good pic

. heres my wifes car on the santa pod track..

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v488/DoubleT/bmwq.jpg?t=
and a little arty one

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v488/DoubleT/DSCF0054.jpg

and a lowish angled picture of my own car..

i like taking photos of cars. but they are a hard subject to get right... im still yet to own a Dslr , so i shall be practicing LOADs when i get one....

DoubleT
03-12-2006, 19:47
and a lowish angled picture of my own car..


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v488/DoubleT/DSCF0122.jpg

Dal
03-12-2006, 22:04
here's what a low angle can do for a shot.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v232/DemonEscortS/Photography/2006_1015061015lakeside0018-1.jpg

ford1
14-12-2006, 18:02
nice shot dal mate very nice indeed

kev