Does this work [Archive] - Talk Photography

Boon

04-01-2007, 22:27

i have fiddled a bit with this photo, but not sure if it works, it looked great on the day, i spoil em with PS i think.
http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a296/stevannie/6trees.jpg

and this one

http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a296/stevannie/peartree.jpg

let me know..

Glen

04-01-2007, 22:33

Looks a bit dark at the bottom, filling in somewhat, could be my lappy screen though?

Venomator

04-01-2007, 22:33

Hey Stev ... :welcome: back m8 ... :thumbs: ... good to hear from you ... !

It does look good Stev .. but it would be better at 800px m8 ... :thinking:

:p

Boon

04-01-2007, 22:46

Hey Stev ... :welcome: back m8 ... :thumbs: ... good to hear from you ... !

It does look good Stev .. but it would be better at 800px m8 ... :thinking:
:p

not so sure about that ven, i had the iso too high and they are very grainy..

Venomator

04-01-2007, 22:50

i have fiddled a bit with this photo, but not sure if it works, it looked great on the day, i spoil em with PS i think.

Of course you could always spoil us with the original for comparison Stev ... :shrug:

I still think the first particularly would be good in larger form ... imo of course ... :D

:p

Marcel

04-01-2007, 23:47

I think the first one is suffering a bit from 'converging verticals' IE the tops are leaning towards the middle.

Nothing that a bit of 2 second skewing / transforming in photoshop wouldnt fix though :)

the second works better for me as a shot, It's nicely broken up into sections and visually appealing and well composed. I think I may be tempted to crop a little off the bottom though.