Final one for now

[IanC_UK]

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[Steve]

Its too busy sir, you need to isolate your subject (the flowers) from the background to keep the viewers attention from wondering. As it is the background is to in focus and distracting while the focus on the flowers doesn’t seem as sharp as it should be. If possible a smaller depth of field (lower F stop) would have helped and getting in closer to the subject.

[IanC_UK]

Its too busy sir, you need to isolate your subject (the flowers) from the background to keep the viewers attention from wondering. As it is the background is to in focus and distracting while the focus on the flowers doesn’t seem as sharp as it should be. If possible a smaller depth of field (lower F stop) would have helped and getting in closer to the subject.

Thank you for the advice :) Will do better next time ! :)