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KenCo
01-04-2005, 23:07
Ok here we go, I have done all the hocus pocus stuff on the pictures I last submitted. Hopefully this time I have got lines straight etc. etc. Also no saturation used, so easier on the eyes. These were taken on the same day, same conditions, same camera and same idiot using it [smilie=s: :lol: .
http://img80.exs.cx/img80/1993/8copy7ub.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)
http://img80.exs.cx/img80/667/28g0tx.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)
http://img80.exs.cx/img80/4835/32copy2em.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)
http://img80.exs.cx/img80/3200/p3300042acopy2xj.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)
http://img80.exs.cx/img80/3206/p3300051acopy5xi.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)
Thanks for looking and any comments appreciated.
Ken.

CT
01-04-2005, 23:21
Ken, they look FAR more natural. :wink:

Great use of foreground detail to provide depth, intelligent use of (near) silhouettes. I like the shot with the daffs in the foreground among the trees and the way your eye is led along the path to the guy as the focal point, and he also stops your eye running on out of the picture. I like the last shot particularly.

There's a lot of thought gone into those. Top effort! 8)

Dave
02-04-2005, 00:08
Very good use of natural framing.

lolyton
02-04-2005, 07:55
This one is a much better effort, it would be interesting to see how you improve if you did it a couple more times. There has definitely been a change in style since the last go.

Maybe you could do a bench brief, it's amazing how interesting just a bench could be. Whenever you get to a beautyspot or a lookout viewing point or even a bus-stop there is always a bench there!

KenCo
02-04-2005, 19:46
There has definitely been a change in style since the last go.
Thanks Lolyton, these are from the same trip though. i filled 2 cards up but not had time to look at all of them yet. :D

lolyton
02-04-2005, 19:49
There you go...shows you how much i know!