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I've decided to give this ago. Hopefully by the end of it I'll have noticed my photos improving and hopefully I will have enjoyed it.
My Rules
- My new images will be shown each week for the theme, there maybe 1 or 2 but onlt 1 shot of the week
- I will describe what I would like to have done differently
- I will limit myself to 3 JOKER during the entire year, which will allow me to do any theme I want
- I will try and comment of everyone's 52 during the course of the week.
Good luck to everyone else whos also going to do a 52 or 365.
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4003/4238027803_3d198a8812.jpg
My 1st Image for Curves
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2672/4244905411_5fd660613d.jpg
My Alternative Image (I prefer this one)
Week 25 + 26 Pose + Beginning (http://www.talkphotography.co.uk/forums/showpost.php?p=2767220&postcount=230)
Good luck Darren :thumbs:
Good luck Darren :thumbs:
Cheers, I'll be following yours too
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4003/4238027803_3d198a8812.jpg
This is my 1st attempt at this weeks theme of Curved
This image may well get changed in the next few days. I'm still fairly new to photography and the things I'd like to change is the image in the background I'd like to have got straighter and sharper.
Feel free to comment with any tips and advice. This is all about learning for me after all.
Davec223
02-01-2010, 23:28
Nice start Darren, the only two things i would look at changing are
1/ as you said straighten up MM image in background.
2/ I would move the glass away from your background so that you do not get the harsh shadow, if you have off camera flash light it from either side with a reflector to help the shadow problem.
SarahLee
03-01-2010, 14:44
Hi Darren and welcome to the 52.
I joined up halfway through last year for the exact same reasons as you.
Nice interpretation of the theme and plenty of curves there :thumbs:
I agree that lining up the image in the background would improve it - although that looks like it's going to be a real fiddly task.
If you're going to reshoot, I'd have a think about the background too. I think maybe a colour (red / blue?) or a black backdrop would help the vase stand out a bit more.
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2672/4244905411_5fd660613d.jpg
After looking back at my photo for Curved I've added an alternative photo which I personally think is better and hopefully you guys agree.
I definitely prefer your 2nd shot/take on this . Looks like you've also used bounced flash as the lighting in the 2nd image is not as harsh as your first image.
I definitely prefer your 2nd shot/take on this . Looks like you've also used bounced flash as the lighting in the 2nd image is not as harsh as your first image.
Thanks I rushed the 1st one and didn't think about the background
SarahLee
05-01-2010, 20:37
I definitely prefer your 2nd shot/take on this . Looks like you've also used bounced flash as the lighting in the 2nd image is not as harsh as your first image.
Agreed. Much better :thumbs:
ShrubMonkey
05-01-2010, 20:48
Yep, just be adding a colourful background has made the image more interesting :)
No#2 is definitely much better. The line of light straight down Mickey's nose in the first one jumps straight out at you and the harsh shadow on the right, but you quickly sorted this out in the second and its a far superior photo :thumbs:
agree, the last version works the best for me.. like the vivid background, the mickey details stand out far more!
foggy4ever
05-01-2010, 22:33
Only advice I can offer to the second shot is to give it a little more room as it's quite a tight shot. lighting is much improved and the red background is very nice.
:thumbs:
I prefer the second although I agree about the very tight crop!
The second is better, the curves in both are clear, but the lack of flash and the colour in the second brings out the subject more.
First of all this is the poem
Chocolate Cake
I love chocolate cake.
And when I was a boy
I loved it even more.
Sometimes we used to have it for tea
and Mum used to say,
'If there's any left over
you can have it to take to school
tomorrow to have at playtime.'
And the next day I would take it to school
wrapped up in tin foil
open it up at playtime
and sit in the corner of the playground
eating it,
you know how the icing on top
is all shiny and it cracks as you
bite into it,
and there's that other kind of icing in
the middle
and it sticks to your hands and you
can lick your fingers
and lick your lips
oh it's lovely.
yeah.
Anyone who knows me will know I love chocolate cake.
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4023/4266977980_4a7436e935.jpg
Bit disappointed with this shot as it looks a bit too dark but I was rushing to take the shot so I could eat it
I love the poem and I love chocolate cake too. I think the photo would be better from a different angle and maybe show some texture, but still, better than mine, I have even got a idea yet.
well done
The biggest problem with food photography: devouring the props. Thats a new poem on me, but I do love cake :D
HopefulM
11-01-2010, 19:39
great poem! I think the pic looks a little bit 'noisy' - but this may well be my laptop as it's not calibrated.
Did it taste as good as it looks? :)
oh its sooo tasty, warm it up then put some ice cream on top
[QUOTE=kimo;2240127]I love the poem and I love chocolate cake too. /QUOTE]
Me too:thumbs::D
uniquegardens
13-01-2010, 00:53
Hi there, :wave:
I do agree with Kimo about the angle of the shot, it does looks a little flat.
Good idea though - how was it?
Graham
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Very nice Poem, the shot was a good idea, but it doesn't quite work for me, sorry... It's a bit noisy, which isn't of itself necessarily an issue, but it also looks a little dark, and I'm finding it hard to see the cake... Sorry.
A lower angle may have worked better and it does look a bit noisy - did you use a high iso or adjust the exposure post shot?
Still, props you can eat are always an excellent idea!
lower angle, get close, let us see the textures and shape of it; you still get to eat just later, it will be more satisfying ;)
SarahLee
16-01-2010, 16:39
Great poem and even better prop :thumbs:
How did it taste?
The execution of the shot is lacking for me though (sorry)
I have to agree with everyone else, it's a bit dark and noisy and the focus isn't quite there.
Food photography isn't easy even if you don't eat your props ;)
But as has already been said, a lower, closer angle would work better as would adding a bit more light to the shot.
This challenge is all about learning, so I'm looking forward to your week 3.
why did i click this thread, i want choc cake now :(
the photo's very noisy for the compression it's quite high
a lower angle on the cake would of worked better too, and need's to be slightly brighter
Thanks for all the comments. I will take all the comments on board and hopefully improve over the coming weeks
clowesey
17-01-2010, 18:05
Love the idea and poem but another one for the 'flat' brigade - sorry.
Would have liked to have seen a crisper, whiter plate
Week 3 - Chopped
I know these 2 photos aren't great but I got my new D90 yesterday and haven't been able to play around with it much to get the settings I like.
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4048/4290740351_2087213471.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2725/4290744561_49155b4b6f.jpg
SarahLee
24-01-2010, 11:33
:clap: Congratulations on your new camera Darren. I hope you enjoy it.
No.1 is a nice clean shot, although I'm not finding it very exciting.
No.2 I think is very good and I love the way that you've managed to capture the steam.
The worktop to the left distracts from the composition a little. Maybe shifting the wok a bit to the right just for the shot, or changing your angle slightly would have helped.
A bit of that red pepper in the wok would have given it a nice colour boost too . . . although it might not have fitted with the recipe :lol:
All in all though, those are minor points. The shot works well. In fact it's the best from your 52 so far. Really good to see the progress through the 3 weeks . . . I feel like I've slipped backwards this week :(
Ambermile
24-01-2010, 11:37
I like the final red MM glass for curved, excellent - was not keen on the other if only because of the sarkness of the shadow.
Chocolate cake eh? Who on earth is going to find fault in a picture of chocolate cake? Well, grainy and not much detail but still... chocolate cake eh?
Chopped, I am with Sarah, if you'd combined the two shots in the pan and *still* got the swirly steam you'd've has a winner. On their own, they are lacking something for me.
Arthur
thanks for the comments. The 1st shot was my original idea then about 5mins later I was cooking and saw the shot. My wife also said it would have been better if it had some pepper in it but it just didn't go with the recipt
I think 2 is the best with the steam but it needs some thing else too... not sure what.... shame its not a plain back ground ?
Terran
I'm with the others here, I prefer #2, the steam capture is excellent. The first is good but it's lacking something. Both are on theme however.
2nd image for me too, the capture of the steam is a top touch.
mickyluv
25-01-2010, 19:27
Well done on your excuse for a dark shot " I was in a rush to eat it" Love it:lol:
I like your take on chopped, like above some more variation on the colour (more ingredients) and maybe a closer crop and you have a really good shot. Keep up the good work and try not to eat all your props....Mick
Harlequin565
26-01-2010, 12:24
Week 3, shot 2 is the best for me. The steam in the pan sets it off a something more than it first appears to be.
Nice work!
Ian.
I like the second one - the steam really lifts it out of the ordinary. Just a pity you couldn't have added a little pepper for its colour, but I understand that you can't mess with the cook. :D
I really didn't like this weeks theme. I was totally uncomfortable doing this but I guess thats the whole idea.
The 1st shot was what I had always planned on going with but the only street map I had was circa1980
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2741/4314709180_b62ed60706.jpg
The 2nd shot wasn't meant to have any cars etc as I was to should the long lonely walk home in the dark.
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2694/4314709294_747962b1ed.jpg
Sorry for the poor images this week.
I was despairing at this week's theme as well. We must keep going though :)
I like the map idea, but to work with the map you have I think you either need a macro or a heavy crop to get really close and say street.
I'm afraid your second image isn't really saying anything to me. I think there's someone in the distance but the light in the foreground (flash?) is making me look there instead. For the sort of shot you have in mind I think you need to catch someone walking under a street light, bump up the ISO and shoot wide as possible (no flash).
I agree with dlh - I reckon the map idea was the way to go, but with the macro/heavy crop idea.
Good effort though :)
The second one doesn't really do much for me I'm afraid, I see what you were aiming for, but the person is too far away.
I think the map is the way to go, but you need to get in much closer.
Well done for getting something, not an easy week.
SarahLee
02-02-2010, 19:01
Definitely a challenging week for a lot of people, so you're not alone.
The second shot has some real potential IMO, but the lighting isn't helping it. I like the composition with the figure on his lonely walk, as Darren said it could really do with him being caught beneath a street lamp and the foreground being darker to give it the emphasis that it needs.
Not a bad week at all though, and that map shot is beautifully crisp and clean. :thumbs:
Harlequin565
04-02-2010, 08:24
Heh. My Grandad was from Uckfield. Small world eh!
I tend to agree with the others. A crop of the map to remove the spine, and focus on a particular street might have worked a bit better.
Chin up! I had real problems with Chopped and Poetry, so I understand where you're coming from. At least you got out, and took some shots, which is the whole point of the 52.
Keep 'em coming!
Ian.
This is my take on speed.
Now as you'll see high shutter speed required.
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2753/4332761209_9bfa699a0b.jpg
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4046/4333544918_2a3608fa7a.jpg Edited
Slimbert
05-02-2010, 21:07
Liking the shot Darren, but I'd say it's a little flat....
Not sure if posting edits are the done thing in 52 threads so I'll twitter you a link to my edit!
Very good effort though, and a stunner of a kid!! :thumbs:
uniquegardens
05-02-2010, 21:52
Very clever! liking the speed shot.
the edited version is better! :clap:
(elfin safety - *** no helmet at that speed!?!?!)
very clever concept!
justlooking
06-02-2010, 19:55
very good .. you did well to capture her at that speed !
Cute looking Speed demon there. :)
Lovely idea and a great little model you have there too :)
Nice shot of your speedy little lady
very cute indeed.. I bet she can get up to a fair speed on that ;)
too be honest Aly may make quite a few appearances during my 52
The edit is much better. Well done for catching her at such speed :)
foggy4ever
07-02-2010, 09:33
Poem....Shame it's a little dark, I would have liked to have seen a more detailed shot of that pudding. Hmmmmmmmmmm pudding :D
Chopped....Second version works very well, it's a great action shot with the steam.
Street....Agree with other comments about the map, a tighter shot showing a street in more detail would work better.
Speed....What you couldn't find a nice steep hill for her :D very cute :thumbs:
SarahLee
09-02-2010, 21:01
Awwww that's really sweet Darren.
The edited version is definitely better, and that's a real keeper for the family album. I like it very much :thumbs:
mickyluv
11-02-2010, 17:49
No 2 is a great keeper Darren and a good take on this weeks theme. Its amazing how fast those flinstone powered vehicles can go...Mick
This is my take on speed
Nice to see Peppa Pig making an appearance in a 52! :thumbs:
Mind you, if you wanna see speed, wait until she decides to try and ride it down the stairs! :eek:
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4007/4354006409_440949fd4c.jpg
I'm really not sure if this has worked, this week was more about getting some Photoshop experience. I've never really used borders or done much editing so I really need to pratice.
The main thing I've learn is I need an off camera flash cord (its now been ordered).
Feel free to give me any tips as this is all about learning and developing my skills
justlooking
14-02-2010, 09:00
nice idea, not sure I like the border.. I feel like I am looking into a box.. hard to explain ! probably just my eyes !:nuts:
foggy4ever
14-02-2010, 10:43
Nice take on Present, great to hear you are practicing something new. The off camera flash cord will be a great addition to your kit. The only slightly negative point I can make is the lighting on the Nikon looks a little harsh compared to the Olympus.
:thumbs:
Nice take on Present, great to hear you are practicing something new. The off camera flash cord will be a great addition to your kit. The only slightly negative point I can make is the lighting on the Nikon looks a little harsh compared to the Olympus.
:thumbs:
The Nikon photo was taken using the Olympus so I had very little options
Stephen Ramsay
14-02-2010, 21:06
Not your strongest image of the 52, but certainly fits the theme.
I spy an Olympus :D If it was possible to get the two together, maybe use the nikon on a timed exposure and place a mirror in front?
Good luck for next week :thumbs:
Nice idea, I spent ages in the loft trying to find my old Ricoh and eventually gave up.
Great idea and it's worked well.. If you're using a P&S you're not going to get SLR quality, and that's fine... just have to work with it... Besides without a mirror it's hard to use the SLR when you're getting a piccy of it :D...
I quite like the processing, it sorta fits with the images and the story. Well done for working on it.
It's worked well and fits the theme. I think you can claim that the darker lighting on the P&S represents the dark ages....;).
Personally I'm not too keen on the border which I find just a bit too fussy, but it must have been a very useful PS exercise for you. - I wouldn't want to attempt something like that!
Good take on the theme :thumbs:
I like the difference in lighting, as Tracer said, it represents the dark ages compared to an slr.
Glad you are trying new things too. I've never used PS, far too complicated for me :eek:
titch124
15-02-2010, 17:20
not sure i like the boarder as said above, but great take on the theme. well done :D
Thanks for all the comments. I'm also not 100% sure on the border but I wanted to get used to using them and trying different things
SarahLee
16-02-2010, 20:48
Hi Darren,
Well done on getting to grips with something new in PS. I actually like the border that you've created and it's something that I'd have no idea how to do . . . my only issue is that I don't think it suits the image that you've used it on. It's worth remembering the technique though, because another week you may have a shot that it will really add to.
The image itself is a good concept for this week's theme. And IMO the addition of text and the lining up of the images has been executed very well :thumbs:
I think it's all been said already about the image quality of the Nikon shot. I don't really mind that per se. It is what it is, a shot from a P&S will never be SLR standard as John said - and in fact the feel can actually add something to some images. Where it's not working for me here is that it's giving the newer "present" shot a grainy, aged feel which seems at odds with what you're trying to get across.
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4058/4365598783_ce42afb787.jpg
I'm not sure about this photo, I know how I wanted it to look but I'm not sure if I've pulled it off.
If we hadn't of had Street a few weeks ago I may have done something along those lines.
well done for thinking of something! I sure cant! i think it would look slightly better without the bright spots on their hats/cheeks etc other than, i like it!
I like this one. I'm just not sure about the background colour and as Pete says, the reflections from the flash are a bit distracting. Can you bounce the flash off something?
Jenny
I was trying to find a suitable background colour and this one seemed the best. As for the flash this is one of the main areas I really need to work on. I will try bouncing the flash and hopefully if I get a chance change it around
Where's Peter Kay ?
It's great. I approve of the background too, I get a bit fed up with black or white backgrounds all the time.
Can we fix it ? :D... I'm not sure on the background colour, and the reflections off the helmets as has been said, but otherwise, it's nicely done.
my grandson would love them!.. he only has bob and the cat :)
I like the background, works with the colours.. as mentioned nice change from black or white.. nicely done!
Slimbert
23-02-2010, 09:59
Lovely idea, not something I'd have thought of...
Only fault I can think of is that the flash needs bouncing off something as it seems a bit harsh, I think the ceiling might work well :thinking:
Good work Darren! :thumbs:
Thank you for taking the time to give your views and thoughts. I take all comments on board and will try to improve
justlooking
24-02-2010, 17:17
like the colours.
Week 8 - Mechanical
This week I had the idea in my head and then found I didn't have a watch which would allow me to make the back off easily.
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4049/4393082506_60a27c038c.jpg
That's a shame. Could have been a good shot but the plastic cover and all the lettering is wrecking it. Get the hammer out ;)
That's a shame. Could have been a good shot but the plastic cover and all the lettering is wrecking it. Get the hammer out ;)
I will revisit this shot when I get the chance
Sorry, wrecking was a bit strong. Spoiling would be better :)
Ambermile
27-02-2010, 21:43
I like it myself, I might even be tempted to accentuate the lettering to make it look like it's hovering over the movement. That's just me though :D
Arthur
justlooking
28-02-2010, 10:03
nice detail, not sure about the plastic, but as it was there perhaps make use of it as already suggested.
foggy4ever
28-02-2010, 10:22
Toy characters seem to be a popular theme for people this week, vibrant shot!
As above, the palstic cover stops it being a detailed shot of the watches working parts.
was thinking along similar lines, but couldnt get any backs off at all.. agree about the plastic, but as you say.. one to revisit? - would be interesting to see that copper coil in detail (I think its copper coil?)
Wow, that's a really interesting mechanical shot. I quite like the fact that it's got this clear plastic covering, and I'm glad it didn't put you off posting the shot. :)
SarahLee
03-03-2010, 17:00
I like your shot for mechanical Darren.
Personally, I'm in 2 minds about the plastic cover . . . as it is I am finding it distracting, mainly because it's oof and kind of in the way.
But I always think that if you can't change something, then try to work with it. If you went with Arthur's suggestion of deliberately emphasising the lettering to make the most of it being there I think it could really work.
Missed your people shot sorry - that made me smile and I actually rather like the green background.
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2764/4408868367_f248e20fbf.jpg
Not really sure if I like this photo. It was taken in my light tent and was really the 1st time I have used this. I think the lighting works pretty well but I think I should have chosen a different subject.
As always please give your honest views as its all about learning for me
bobsbabes
05-03-2010, 22:36
i like the shot but it seems to lack detail like the peoples faces iyswim also would rather see the dogs face than his bum !!!!
I'm getting concerned about your collection of toys Darren :) I think the background (whilst a nice blue) isn't helping the overall picture here. Toys on the carpet or in the living room would add more "play" context rather than attempting something clinical like this.
justlooking
07-03-2010, 13:47
Don't know much (if anything !!) about light boxes but if the idea is to light the subject with shadows all over the place then it worked !
blakester
07-03-2010, 16:06
I like the colours and your thought behind this Darren but it just needs a little something to make the subject pop a bit. Not really sure what that something is though....:thinking: perhaps a different dof, just to separate the figures from their surroundings. Iain
foggy4ever
07-03-2010, 18:42
Nice idea but as above not sure if using the light tent has worked, maybe if it was just one toy in the tent or all of them in a more natural enviroment.
SarahLee
08-03-2010, 18:50
:D Well it made me smile!
Bright, fun and cheerful.
I'd quite like to see a bigger version because I'm having to peer right into the screen to see any detail - however, I reckon the light tent has definitely worked to minimise shadows and cut down reflections on the shiny plastic.
I'm just not sure that blue was the right choice of background for the subjects in this one. The blue toys are disappearing into it and the pink ones are just clashing. Something more neutral may have worked better with the bright subjects - or just setting the light tent up over the carpet to give a more natural feel :shrug:
As always please give your honest views as its all about learning for me
I really like it... it's just a nice happy smiley type of image. Some days you need to see an image like this, and today is one of those days for me. Top marks, love it! :thumbs:
Darren, I'm not sure on this... the scene works, and the toys are sharp and colourful, but I don't think the blue background does anything for it.
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4015/4433343488_935e81e3c5.jpg http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2632/4433343044_e32ffdbf54.jpg
This week I really didn't have the umph to do this. My idea really didnt take off. I know what I wanted to achieve but couldn't pull in off.
The only plus point from this week was that I got to use my wireless shutter release for the 1st time.
Otherwise I think I will just write this week off and move on to week 11 and I really must start to up my game.
I just want to know where everyone gets there test tubes from.
I guess you're not keen on the results for this week and you probably know what might be wrong with them. But from my point of view the first isn't helped by the background, whilst the second seems to have too much light/reflection. A combination of the two would have helped. The white tack is a bit out of place too (although a clever idea), perhaps trying to stick it out of view would save a cloning job.
You're not the only one looking forward to getting this week out of the way, although it seems most of us think that every week :D
Darren, I think the one on the right works better, with the uncluttered background, but the fizzing in the first tubes on the left hand side works well. It's on theme.
Darren... you'll get used to that.... wait till we get past week 40 and it's all downhill :lol: Remind me again why I'm doing this for a second year ?? ;)
I just want to know where everyone gets there test tubes from.
Good olde eBay.
justlooking
15-03-2010, 19:51
good colours and you got to play with your wireless shutter release so all was not lost !
SarahLee
16-03-2010, 20:07
Darren,
Don't be too hard on yourself this week - we'll all have weeks like this.
FWIW you've learnt how to use your remote shutter release and I think these are actually quite good.
The background in the second is definitely better and the colours have come out well.
I agree with (the other) Darren on the lighting and white tack - but it's a long way from being a disaster.
In fact I think it's got real potential. If you could have worked with those couple of niggles - and maybe played with the levels in the test tubes to get them lined up on or on a slope to give a bit more visual impact, there's the makings of a very good shot there.
Here's to a week 12 that you're happier with.
I just want to know where everyone gets there test tubes from.
You've obviously never bought orchids from a florist's.:lol:
I was definitely the same with Chemistry...I like the second shot though and once you have done something like this once it gives you something to think about how to improve it if you do it again...I have been experimenting with droplet shots and seem to get a little better each time I play but still have a huge way to go.....I'm guessing that is a really good thing about the 52..being pushed to have a go at things you wouldn't attempt otherwise :)
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4067/4451269935_211df5d128.jpg
Not really Candid but the day I had free to get out and about and it rained
What style !!
Wet play then ?
It's great, a real moment in time, great DOF, good colours and a god take on the theme.
Darren, a lovely image you've caught there. Sharp and Clear... it looks like it's on theme, but I'm gonna guess you were spotted... ;)
SarahLee
22-03-2010, 18:57
It's funny this week - we've had some candid shots that look posed and now one shot that wasn't candid but looks it.
It definitely looks in keeping with the theme.
She looks very smart in her Winter gear and you've caught a lovely moment there. The flying scarf ends add a nice little detail to it :thumbs:
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4047/4470961988_e81821684e.jpg
This is my attempt at a trypich and its my 1st ever attempt and to be honest I pleased with how it came out.
The thing I'm not happy with is the images. The strawberry on the right hand side isn't clear enough
and I would have changed this but the battery ran out
(I have now ordered a spare!).
Its also one of the 1st times I have used my Nikon 60mm Macro so I'm trying new things all the time
jollyjack
28-03-2010, 19:47
Its a pitty the battery ran out, because it agree with your comment about the strawberry. Apart from that great framing of 3 good subjects. Wish i had a 60mm Macro
Lovely 'candid' shot - great capture, little girls just love dressing up :).
Really like the three 'produce' shots - putting the three together works really well.
justlooking
30-03-2010, 16:06
like your triptych, it came out very well
Darren the produce triptych has worked really well, the niggle being the strawb, but you know about that one...
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4014/4479963208_70db4d9d84.jpg
Just added an edit with a better strawberry picture
jeangenie
31-03-2010, 21:25
Hi Darren, I'm sorry it's taken me soooo long to visit your 52, but I've just had an enjoyable browse through it. There's nothing sensible or useful I can add to all the comments over the weeks, so I'll jump straight into Week 12 Produce. :)
Produce: I love this - and congratulations on your first triptych. You have every reason to be pleased with it, especially with the edited version with the new strawberry. I love the variations in texture of the 3 fruits and the colour progression from pale (almost grey) green, through orange to red.
It looks as though you're enjoying your macro lens! It opens up a whole new set of opportunities, doesn't it? ;)
I'll try and drop in more regularly from now on! :D
Jean
philthejuggler
31-03-2010, 21:27
Hi Darren - I like your product shot - I think it could be further enhanced by upping the saturation slightly on the left & middle shots so they compete with the strawberry for vibrance.
Phil
SarahLee
02-04-2010, 15:44
That's worked very well Darren - looks like you're having fun with that new macro lens.
I'm undecided between the 2 strawberry shots. Second one definitely looks sharper, but I do really like the angle on the first one. It's a shame that your battery went before you could get the best of both worlds.
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2785/4484727912_96882c62c7.jpg
Not sure if this works but I thought of ths idea straight away as soon as I hear the theme was Quad. I quite like it the only thing I don't like is the border but I have no idea how to make my own and this is the only one I had
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4051/4484106417_c4b86bebed.jpg http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4065/4484757898_f782a0faf4.jpg
These are my reshoot shots for the week 'Play' still not perfect but I'm happier with them then the other shot which was http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2764/4408868367_f248e20fbf.jpg
that works well as a quadtych Darren, great imaginative idea, i see what you mean about the border i struggled to create my own but ended up finding one on a magazine disc. You have a good reshoot too, i personally prefer the stack of chips to the fan of cards, I think the stack could be improved by lining the side markings up in a line or diagonal. The fan looks nice and sharp but the stack in front of it could do with being to the right a bit more. A good effort all round this week.
Darren great idea for Quad and well implemented. I can't help on the border... sorry... I prefer the stack of chips for Play reshoot... and whilst the alignment of the borders is nearly right, I have to agree.. it would look better neater.
Digitall
02-04-2010, 22:15
Quad. The top two images are eggstremely close to the edge of the frame whereas the bottom two have area around them, if they were all the same it would balance the image. Also the bigger items are at the top of the frame making it look top heavy IMO.
Allan
Candid is just gorgeous! :clap:
Produce - your second version is excellent. :thumbs: I also got a 60mm micro recently and find it great fun.
Quad - I don't normally have a sweet tooth at all but creme eggs :love:... I think I'll have to go and get one tomorrow! The idea is very good and the individual images excellent -- maybe someone can help with the borders.
Allan has a point that it looks slightly top heavy - maybe it would work better as a strip going from untouched egg to crumpled wrapper?
Reshoot - I prefer the first one. It just seems to catch my attention more.
Allan has a point that it looks slightly top heavy - maybe it would work better as a strip going from untouched egg to crumpled wrapper?
I would have prefered the shot if I had a border so they could run from left to right.
That's what I meant. You'll just have to learn how to make your own borders....but don't ask me how. :D
justlooking
03-04-2010, 19:49
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm creme egg. Like that one ..could be for produce or quad !
as for re-shoot I like the fan of cards
Quad - This is really good. I know what you mean about frames, I spent more time this week googling 'how to divide a picture into 4' than I care to admit.
Reshoot - I'm jealous you had time to do both :( I think my fave is the chips.
blakester
04-04-2010, 08:57
Darren, I like your quad image, the borders give it a more fun look which I think works with the subject.
I like the stack of chips image for reshoot, perhaps the only slight change would be to see the top chip at more of an angle, just to give it a bit more depth rather than being face on IYSWIM.
Iain
foggy4ever
04-04-2010, 13:05
The second chemistry shot works better with the uncluttered background.
You can't go wrong with a candid of a child playing although I would have like to see her looking up slightly rather than down.
Glad you managed to get a better stawberry shot to add to what is a great triptych.
Quad very clever and 4 crisp shots, now where are my cream eggs.....slurp
daddy day care
05-04-2010, 10:24
I like the border you have used but agree it would have been better going across in a row of four.
More space around the eggs was my initial thought but also the fingernail marks in the chocolate. I know how difficult it is to avoid though, I love creme eggs :lol:
A very good take on the theme. I did not do "quad" as I couldn't get the border right so well done :thumbs:
Andy
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2080/4511589111_934017d5fb.jpg
I had some good ideas for this week but none of them worked out. So this is my take on 'Shoot'
Once again an tips or advise is always welcome
jeangenie
12-04-2010, 06:49
Quad: What can be bad about Creme Eggs? :D Yummy (apart from bottom right, of course) :)
Seriously, the border's a bit different and apart from being a bit tight on the top two frames, it works. It sort of goes with the demolition process of the egg. :D
Shoot: Lovely colours (is that blue sky :eek::eek::eek:). It looks very spring-like and my only suggestion would be to blur out the background a little more if possible. Good take on the theme. :thumbs:
Jean
Very nice. Blue sky, a new bud, what could be more uplifting than spring ?
Like the idea, it's pin sharp & there are some wonderfully muted colours. Personal feeling re the DOF is that it's spot on, any more bokeh and you may 'lose' the subject matter in the background.
Bang on I'd say.
Darren, it works for me... On theme, clear and sharp where it needs to be... good colours :thumbs:
justlooking
12-04-2010, 19:27
like the shoots against the blue sky, spring has finally sprung!
SarahLee
12-04-2010, 19:35
Great idea for quad - as has been said already, a simpler border may have worked better, but the one you have is really not bad.
Each individual image is strong and sharp, and although going for consistent sizing might have given more balance to it, it still works well as it is.
Both reshoots for play are loads better than the original.
I absolutely love the stack of chips. Well composed, sharp and nicely lit :thumbs:
Shoot : Works well for me. Very Springlike, beautiful blue sky and nice detail in the shoots.
The one shoot facing directly forward to the camera is a little off-putting, but it's really not a major distraction.
dan_yorkshire
12-04-2010, 20:58
Nicely on theme and a nice shot, agree with sarah that the bud facing the camera is slightly distracting but very nice colours and dof.
Spot on
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2773/4518780654_464f600238.jpg
This is my new photo for the theme Street, I personally think this is better than my 1st attemps below.
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2741/4314709180_b62ed60706.jpg http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2694/4314709294_747962b1ed.jpg
MadFrankie
13-04-2010, 19:15
Like the shoot theme, similar ideas to mine. I like the subject and the colours, I agree with Jean that the background could be a little offputting and the bud facing you is a little distracting but neither enough to really distract you from the great pic...
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2690/4531596595_889a85d1e0.jpg
Had a few ideas for this one but decided to got for a 'Single' red rose.
SarahLee
18-04-2010, 20:11
That's a really pretty rose shot.
Nice and sharp and I really like the contrast of the background against the flower.
That works well for me.
nice background colour you chose for the rose, they compliment each other well.. agree, its sharp, well focused and very pretty..
Darren, that works well, excellent background choice and spot on Rose :thumbs:
Great sharpness, colour and use of DOF. :thumbs:
Harlequin565
20-04-2010, 12:24
Quad was a winner for me and really made me smile. Nice idea and one of the best quadtych's I've seen for that topic. :clap:
The rose for Single is very nice. Great DoF and a good choice of background. Works very well.
Ian.
daddy day care
20-04-2010, 17:35
Lovely sharp, crisp shot. Great depth of field and plain backround are spot on.
Andy
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4025/4544312056_bd331dd96b.jpg
Not very creative of me this week but this is my attempt at stare. Looking back the right handside isn't very well lit.
This could be one to re-take later on.
Harlequin565
23-04-2010, 11:09
It's not that bad...
It does look like you took a shot of your face then cropped it though. Although you have a range of tones from Black to white, there is a predominant grey wash over the final image. Looks like natural light? For an "impact" shot like that (just a pair of eyes) I'd be expecting a bit more contrast. Maybe try a harsher light to get some serious shadows going on?
Just an idea though.
Ian.
It's not that bad...
It does look like you took a shot of your face then cropped it though. Although you have a range of tones from Black to white, there is a predominant grey wash over the final image. Looks like natural light? For an "impact" shot like that (just a pair of eyes) I'd be expecting a bit more contrast. Maybe try a harsher light to get some serious shadows going on?
Just an idea though.
Ian.
Thank you for the tips, I shall try what you suggested
Good effort and nicely sharp Darren, you can easily help ease the shadow with a reflector of some sort (tin foil if you havn't got one) it may help the overall image with a thickish black border top and bottom .
I agree with both the above. It is nearly there - a reflector, a bit more contrast and a border is all it needs.
justlooking
25-04-2010, 19:51
I like the idea. I attempted somthing similar but couldn't get it nearly as good so ditched it! Just a bit dark on the right as you said yourself.
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4039/4568210805_887e1876af.jpg
This week I can a clear idea what I wanted...however it didn't plan out right.
Not really happy with this shot.
BUT we keep going and I'm really enjoying challenging myself and trying things I wouldn't normally do
Quite a colourful image this one, personally i would tighten the crop and get rid of the foreground and the trees at the top, just a sort of pano of the middle section with a border top and bottom. What were you aiming to achieve that you didn't get?
Harlequin565
01-05-2010, 20:19
What were you aiming to achieve that you didn't get?
For me, it's a lack of subject that's missing here. I've gone back through the last few pages here Darren, and when you have a subject, or a clear idea in mind (the rose, the poker chip for example) you turn in a wonderful shot.
If you have the chance to go back, maybe try and get in closer to a particular grave and looks for some detail that you do have an eye for (as evinced in your other shots) with some OOF background interest.
It's one of the things I've found difficult in this 52. Take a picture that fits the theme (which this does), but make it interesting. Sometimes, I spend too long scratching my head...
Hope this doesn't downheart you too much. You have some grand shots in this thread, and I'd really like to see a reshoot.
Keep it up!
:thumbs:
Ian.
Hope this doesn't downheart you too much. You have some grand shots in this thread, and I'd really like to see a reshoot.
Keep it up!
:thumbs:
Ian.
Thanks for your comments. Of course it doesn't downheart me. I really want to learn and develop at taking photos. If the weathers nice I plan on getting out and reshooting this.
Thanks again for your comments
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3342/4568533869_79be746d63.jpg
Slight edit which also includes a border.
justlooking
02-05-2010, 07:20
the thing that struck me about the image(s) is the amount of colour. More often than not images of cemetries are in black and white. Somehow it feels a very busy peaceful place .. mmm that sounds daft but hope you know what I mean. Oh by the way I do like it in colour.
SarahLee
02-05-2010, 09:31
I agree with both the above. It is nearly there - a reflector, a bit more contrast and a border is all it needs.
Sorry Darren, I totally missed your stare. Seems like I missed quite a few last week. :(
But Tracer has already said what I wanted to . . . very close, but needs a bit more oomph.
For a selfie it's very sharp though - and you've got some lovely catchlights in there.
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BUT we keep going and I'm really enjoying challenging myself and trying things I wouldn't normally do
And that's what the 52 is all about.
None of us are going to get a perfect shot every week (in fact I'd settle for a perfect shot just one week :lol:)
It's incredibly frustrating when you see an idea in your mind and can't quite get what you want in the camera.
What was it that you'd planned with this one?
For me (and this has already been mentioned by others) the shot is a bit too busy to convey the feel of the place.
I'd really like to have seen a narrower DoF or different composition to make a single gravestone the main focal point.
The crop and border are a big improvement though.
I also like the fact that you've chosen to leave it in colour and the beams of sunlight coming through the trees have come out very well - so definitely not one to beat yourself up over.
jeangenie
02-05-2010, 09:57
Catch up time for me, Darren. :)
Stare: I think any self-portrait is difficult. Yes, a bit more oomph would be good, but it's a perfectly fine image as it is, and as Sarah said, good catchlights, which make it for me! :thumbs:
Peace: I like photos that buck the trend. :) In this case, we usually end up making grave yards dull, gloomy, b&w and gothic. This is bright, sunny and cheerful and I could imagine sitting on a bench in the sunshine feeling totally at peace with the world. :clap::clap::clap:
What is difficult in this type of shot is creating a 'pattern' or route through the image that the eye can follow naturally. If you do a reshoot at any time (on a sunny day!) I'd try to find a pov where you can create that journey around the image. (I hope that makes sense.) The other problem with this type of shot (and I also find it with groups of things like flowers) is where to crop? I think in this case, I'd crop it to portrait and see if that gives a stronger composition. I hope this doesn't sound critical, because I do like the shot. :)
Jean
I like it Darren, lovely colours and it looks peaceful. I think Jean's insight is just what's needed (for me too... thanks Jean)...
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4014/4592815770_145d0181fc.jpg
My brain hasn't really been working to its full this week as I've been ill, but I still quite like this shot
justlooking
09-05-2010, 19:07
Hope you are feeling better... and could indulge in your indulgence. I like the square format.
Harlequin565
10-05-2010, 15:55
Heh. I really like this. Can't stand Ferrero Whatsits, so this looks like some sort of strange chocolate asteroid. Looks very precariously perched.
Nice & sharp, and I like the square crop.
:thumbs:
Ian.
dan_yorkshire
10-05-2010, 19:37
Nice and sharp Darren but the image is lacking something for me.
I think I would a crop not so tight with the choc to the left of the image, maybe some off camera flash from the left throwing a shadow to the right.
Good subject though and hope you're feeling better.
blakester
10-05-2010, 20:37
Nice sharp image Darren. I agree with Dan though, just a wee bit more space around the chocolate would help. I hope your on the mend. Iain
Ian_Wilson
11-05-2010, 00:00
Looks like a good standard product shot to me, with the nice white background in the distance and the interesting surface with the slight reflection around the base. I like the way it seems to be teetering and on the 'spikes' and looks like it could fall oveer at anytime.
Ian
foggy4ever
11-05-2010, 10:32
Nice crisp shot for shoot with some rare blue sky.
Lovely shot of a rose with soft pastel colour and just a tade of green. The backround colour works with it as well.
Agree with your self crit about the light for the stare shot, look forward to seeing a reshoot. Also try to get some good catchlights in the eyes from a window.
More of that sweet sweet chocolatey goodness :D
:thumbs:
SarahLee
11-05-2010, 20:55
My brain hasn't really been working to its full this week as I've been ill, but I still quite like this shot
Yep. I like this too :thumbs:
Good detail, nice and sharp . . . I'd never realised just how much texture is in the surface of these.
The background sets it off perfectly and I actually really like the super close crop.
Hope you're feeling better soon.
"Ah Mr Ambassador" :D...
:agree: with Sarah... excellent shot and nicely taken, surprising the amount of texture on the surface. It fits the theme.
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3541/4613104784_4b75e788b8.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3389/4613104504_616f6c1c8b.jpg
These are my attempt at People, I think their better than my original attempt but still not right.
daddy day care
16-05-2010, 20:55
I quite like these model figure still life shots.
However, I think these would be better if all of the people were in focus. I don't mind OOF backgrounds or some of the details but feel the people all needed to be sharp.
Andy
Too be honest thats what I thought
I saw your indulgence shot of the chocolate and instantly had to go for a rustle round the kitchen to look for some chocolates - didn't find any :(
However, my point being that the image looks good enough to eat! Do agree with others however that it needed a bit more space around the chocolate.
People re-shoot: Your latest attempt is much better than the previous in terms of lighting and contrast, but I do wish that all the people were in focus. I'm also not sure that the bin needs to be there as it's weirdly large in proportion to the people.......
justlooking
18-05-2010, 16:23
as your latest attempt at people is an improvement it is a good re-shoot ! Not sure I like the backgound in the second one but like more of the people being in focus
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3396/4632942330_bd144aab9d.jpg
I couldn't really get inspired for this weeks theme. I've gone for this shot as this is apart of my day I really enjoy, home from work and all my jobs are done and I get to STOP and relax for half an hour with my headphones on.
justlooking
23-05-2010, 20:15
ahh nothing like a lie down in a darkened room to recover from a days work :)
good idea for a shot on what most people think has been a difficult and uninspiring theme. Definitely an important part of the day too!
Digitall
24-05-2010, 22:19
I would have liked to have seen a reflector used just to add a bit of brightness to the dark area on the subjects right side. Apart from that it's not a shot that will win any prizes but a good record of that moment in time.
Allan
philthejuggler
24-05-2010, 23:26
I like the idea for this shot but the result is a little dull - perhaps increasing the exposure or converting to B&W would lift it.
Phil
Harlequin565
25-05-2010, 08:55
I was going to say that it does look a bit dark on my screen. However i terms of "themeness", I think this week just gone made me think "stop" every time I sat down to unwind. I think you've projected the sentiment well. I just think it's a bit dark and dull as others have said.
Ian.
People reshoot... I think the background of the first is much better, but the people all in focus is better... but... they fit the theme.
Stop... fits the theme really well... I could do with getting in some of that.
dan_yorkshire
26-05-2010, 18:42
Like the idea behind your spot shot but the image is a little flat, maybe a B&W conversion with a punchy contrast might help it.
Good effort
Fits the theme and I like the composition - like the others I feel a reflector to lighten the shadow side a tad would have helped.
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4066/4653071467_614b8e59ba.jpg
Fingers crossed this is a better attempt than last weeks.
Perhapes not the greatest but this is my wife with the scan from this Monday of our 2nd child which is due 1st week of October
SarahLee
30-05-2010, 20:59
:thumbs: People reshoot is a BIG improvement on the original.
Of the two the first definitely works better for me, the second looks a little overexposed on my monitor. Love the b/g on the first and I don't mind at all that the background people are out of focus.
Stop : It was a horrible theme, so well done on getting something that works. You definitely look very relaxed.
As has been said it's lacking a bit of oomph, but it's by no means a bad shot and I know that SPs are never easy.
Isolation : A very sensitive and emotional shot.
Definitely one to keep for the album and I like the way that you've positioned it so that you're looking over her shoulder at the scan pic.
Given that the scan is in B&W, I wonder if a contrasty B&W conversion might work well on the whole shot. It might help to make the scan a stronger focal point, rather than being drawn to the red in your wife's top.
p.s. Congratulations to both of you!
That's a lovely shot, and I think Sarah might be right with going for a mono look
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4035/4660261085_c45940bf86.jpg
The23rdman
01-06-2010, 18:43
Love it! I am biased though as Ali is 6 months pregnant with our first too. :)
I love this shot Darren, you have created a beautiful composition to lead the eye straight to the subject. Excellent dof on your good lady and the mono conversion is spot on. Congratulations on two jobs well done;)
SarahLee
01-06-2010, 19:10
Thanks for trying out the B&W suggestion :thumbs:
And it works much better for me. Draws my eye straight to the scan picture.
Thanks for trying out the B&W suggestion :thumbs:
And it works much better for me. Draws my eye straight to the scan picture.
Thank you for the tip, I have to agree it looks much better
:agree:... much better in Mono... lovely Damien... one to be printed I reckon.
justlooking
06-06-2010, 15:46
another vote for the B&W version.
Another for the b&w.... very nice shot and congratulations....could almost make me broody...almost but not quite...I have 3 already :D
http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1305/4675641971_67f181645b.jpg
Quality time for Fifi and George
Sorry for the poor image but imho this weeks theme was poop.
Heres hoping next week is better
It works for quality time... The comp isn't too bad, apart from the background and the orange blob on the left .. :D
:lol: like the idea and dont be sorry it was as you say a poooop theme!!!
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4065/4699995277_074aa2f0b5.jpg
Slightly different take on the week Post. Not sure if people will like it or not.
The thing I'd change is the background but I still think it gets the message across.
As always C&C always welcome
Darren, I like this. Very simple, very colourful and good DOF. Bang on theme.
Not sure what the banner is in the background, but it would have been too plain without it.
Jenny
SarahLee
14-06-2010, 18:47
Quality made me smile, which has to be a good thing.
Fifi and George look like they're enjoying themselves and apart from the couple of things that John pointed out, it's not a bad shot (especially considering how rubbish the theme was)
Post : Another uninspiring theme, but I really do like this take on it. I don't know where you got all these little models from, but they make very effective subjects.
You've already mentioned the b/g, but it's really not that distracting. You've judged the DoF well, but maybe a bit of selective desaturation on the red???
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4005/4700487401_7ab370bd9d.jpg
Thanks for the comments, jennyb and SarahLee
Is this what you meant on the selective desaturation
SarahLee
14-06-2010, 20:50
Is this what you meant on the selective desaturation
Sorry. I probably didn't explain very well.
I meant just desaturate the red in the background to make it less obvious, but leave the foreground as it is. It would probably need a bit of tricky masking, but it would make the background fade away more.
Ah sorry. My PP skills are nowhere near good enough :lol:
jeangenie
14-06-2010, 21:59
Sorry I haven't commented for a while, Darren. I trying to hve a massive catch up now! :)
Indulgence: You can't have too many choccy shots, imho, and I love this and totally admire your self-control in leaving it alone long enough to shoot it! :)
People reshoot: I'm unsure about photos of little models - I don't think that the proportions ever seem quite right. The upside is I think it gives you licence to break all the rules! I agree with the comments about having all the people in focus, though. :)
Stop: It's a good take on the theme - and you look totally relaxed. :) It could do with a bit of a boost - or perhaps a dreamy b&w treatment would work. :shrug: :)
Isoslation: Many congrats to you and Mrs Darren. :) This would be an excellent subject for Quality! I did something similar for Present - with Mr JG holding a scan of our 3rd grandchild due in August, so I can identify with the emotion in the image. I agree the b&w fits the bill perfectly. Lovely image and one to treasure. :)
Quality: This made me smile - and it's bright and colourful. I'd have liked to see them enjoying their quality time in a beautiful garden or on the beach etc, etc, but it's a good take on the theme. :)
Post: It's a grotty theme, but I like your take on it. :thumbs:
Jean
davidh6781
15-06-2010, 09:01
Good take on the theme, I preffer the first one and if the banner in the bg could be toned down a little it would bring out the post box and bike more.
good work on the "Post" theme.
dan_yorkshire
15-06-2010, 19:01
Like the post image mate, I still dont know what it is though (Toy or shot from a model villiage)
Agree about the desaturation of the background, will make the foreground colours stand-out even more.
Dan
Also trying to catch up here!
Isolation: congratulations. Excellent use of DOF and the B&W conversion suits perfectly.
Quality: a fun image that makes me smile. I would clone out the orange blob on the left and increase the saturation a bit to make the colours really pop.
Post: another fun take on the theme that works really well. The background is so beautifully soft that I the banner doesn't worry me.
foggy4ever
17-06-2010, 16:21
People reshoot...Out of the 2 shots I much prefer the first with the narrow dof and the clean background. The second looks too bright.
Stop...What no hand, we all need to stop and relax!
Isolation...lovely shot, composition and lighting is spot on.
Quality...I think the shot would have been alot better with a cleaner background.
Post...Nice idea for post, something a little different and the red really pops.
The23rdman
17-06-2010, 16:45
I like your post shot, mate, but it's a little flat. Could use some contrast and a bit more colour.
justlooking
20-06-2010, 08:13
Quality - also made me smile so that has to be a good thing, they look very relaxed and seem to be enjoying their quality time!
Post - I like the original. Fun take on the theme.
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4020/4718701288_277cc91d82.jpg
This wasn't the image I was planning but nevermind. The off putting thing for me is the background if it wasn't so busy I think it would have come out better.
Please feel free to give any advice and comments
philthejuggler
20-06-2010, 22:35
I agree it isn't the most striking shot - a B&W conversion might help to minimise the distractions, but really it wanted a shallower dof.
Phil
davidh6781
21-06-2010, 10:04
agree the background tree took my eye before the statue did, maybe if the bg was blurred to seperate them? I like the idea.
I agree it isn't the most striking shot - a B&W conversion might help to minimise the distractions, but really it wanted a shallower dof.
Phil
I agree, I was rushing around as it had just started to rain
It is a good idea for the subject, though, and worth going back when you have more time and better lighting.
SarahLee
21-06-2010, 19:57
I think you've got it spot on yourself with the background on this one.
It's a shame because it's a beautiful sculpture, and you've got the angle just right. I really like the way that you're looking up at it and you've caught the water spilling over the edge of the pool.
I wonder if there might be something you can bring back out of it in PP. As Phil said B&W might help, but I'd be tempted to use a layer mask to then bring back some of the colour in the statue.
Post is an excellent take on the theme, and an unusual one too... I think Sarah is right about desaturating that banner a little.
Metal, As you said, the DOF is the issue... you could try selecting the statue, invert, and apply some lens blur... that may be sufficient to throw the trees out. Otherwise I like it, and the angles work well.
http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1036/4724899799_691eefd881.jpg
A slight edit added
de saturated is much better for me that the original, i'd still like to see a mono with the contrast pushed a bit.
Your post shot is great, its an excellent quirky shot.
de saturated is much better for me that the original, i'd still like to see a mono with the contrast pushed a bit.
Your post shot is great, its an excellent quirky shot.
Thank you very much.
I will have a play around with a mono version and see how it comes out.
philthejuggler
22-06-2010, 21:23
That's a huge improvement - making me think of other possibilities with replacing the green in the background with something surreal (like a light pink) to make a very unusual image.
Phil
ranarama
22-06-2010, 21:51
I agree with the others that the 2nd is a better shot but I think just a shallow DOF would probably have helped the first shot in the first place.
http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1201/4730055138_84d889a19a.jpg
As I have a week off this week I had the urge to update a few photos.
So this is a new edit for Week 3 - Chopped
Sorry for the lack of effort but I really couldn't think of anything for the theme Grunge so I used my own theme which is Pose
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4101/4752853314_89322e37a7_o.jpg
For week 26 I have gone with the following photo
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4141/4752212437_9f7516690c_o.jpg
The photo is me with my CV looking for a job - which will signal a new beginning.
The 'pose' shot is lovely, colour and composition look great, the expression on the little girls face is priceless - one beautiful model :)
Your second shot fits the theme spot on - good luck with your job hunting.
SarahLee
05-07-2010, 20:31
Don't blame you for binning grunge ! And it's a sweet portrait - far more appealing than something grungey.
Shame about the background. If you'd moved her a little to the left so that she was completely in front of the wall it would have been a big improvement.
:thinking: Actually, I think you could just about get away with cropping this along the edge of the wall and just below the hem of her dress to lose the distractions.
Best of luck with the job hunting (assuming it's for real and not just set up for the shot)
Good interpretation of the theme, although again I'm finding that the bits chopped off at the top of the frame distracting. Maybe another candidate for a crop? Although I actually think that a lower angle would have made this a more interesting shot.
justlooking
05-07-2010, 20:35
I am so nosey I find it annoying I can't read the cv or job advert very well! Good take on the theme though. Good luck with the job hunting.
I am so nosey I find it annoying I can't read the cv or job advert very well! Good take on the theme though. Good luck with the job hunting.
:lol: I was trying to be careful and not reveal too many details.
And thank you with the good luck
Don't blame you for binning grunge ! And it's a sweet portrait - far more appealing than something grungey.
Shame about the background. If you'd moved her a little to the left so that she was completely in front of the wall it would have been a big improvement.
:thinking: Actually, I think you could just about get away with cropping this along the edge of the wall and just below the hem of her dress to lose the distractions.
Best of luck with the job hunting (assuming it's for real and not just set up for the shot)
Good interpretation of the theme, although again I'm finding that the bits chopped off at the top of the frame distracting. Maybe another candidate for a crop? Although I actually think that a lower angle would have made this a more interesting shot.
Thank you for the comments. I was a bit disappointed with the pose shot and some of the others shes in the centre of the wall but this one had the best 'pose'
The beginning shot might have a re-visit in the near future as it didn't come out quite as I was hoping.
Thank you for the good luck as well
Hi Darren, I like your pose shot. The colour of her dress really jumps out and she has a lovely natural expression. Grunge was a horrible one so well done for being brave enough to dump it.
I think your beginnings shot is quite a clever idea. I like the compostion but I would have removed the bits and pieces at the top of the photo.
Good luck with the job hunting.
Jenny
karmagarda
08-07-2010, 13:28
Hi Darren, Don't worry about the pose shot being out of theme, it's a really nice photo! As mentioned I love out the dress jumps out, and her pose is really cute!
Beginnings, like it! And good look with the job :)
Lovely shot for grunge pose, who cares about grunge anyway... it's worked very well, I do agree with Sarah though about moving her a little to the left to clear the background...
Beginnings, fits the theme perfectly, it's clear what's going on. The chopped off bits at the top... don't add anything... unless of course that was a bit of lens and you were going for a photography job, in which case, including more of it would have been better... but you've ringed something unrelated... I think the lower angle would probably have been better also, and it would allow you to use the DOF to cover the bits you don't want revealed yet still allow us to read some things...
Good luck with the job hunt :thumbs:
What a gorgeous little girl and a beautiful pose! I agree with the others about the background but I think just toning down the bookcase would help.
Beginnings - I would lose the bits at the top but otherwise it's a good take on the theme - good luck with the job hunting.
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