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spencer
13-05-2007, 22:39
I like the detail in this, but I'm not sure about the composition?

Any C&C gratefully received.

Spence

http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s48/spencer_100/swanMedium.jpg?t=1179126445

TomB
13-05-2007, 23:26
Try it the right way up maybe?

Sorry, couldn't resist :lol:

spencer
14-05-2007, 06:56
I did actually try it that way, but I wasn't to sure!:bonk:

Anyway is that anybetter?:thinking:

Messiah Khan
14-05-2007, 08:43
Nice shot. In terms of composition, if possible I would maybe move the head up and to the right a little. Say halve the amount of space between the top of the head and the top of the frame, and about the same on the righ hand side.