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barcly
28-05-2007, 13:00
Don't know if this works? I kind of like it but the colour balance seems wrong?http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb129/barcly/gate.jpg

scoff
28-05-2007, 13:55
Cant put my finger on it, but it just doesnt jump out at you. Have you done much PP to it?? poss worth a play?!

petemc
28-05-2007, 14:09
Personally I feel its a bit of a dull subject. The gate isn't really the focus, the corner of the gate is. I think the background is too busy to get a nice shot but close up's with the detail of the rust could be more fun.

barcly
28-05-2007, 14:36
Yes I have thought about a close up, I will give it a go. I think it's areally old victorian gate, the house was knocked down years ago

RobertP
28-05-2007, 19:52
Don't know if it leads to anything worth seeing but I feel like I want to drag the left edge of the picture across to see where it goes.

A bit more contrast and sharpening might improve it a bit but a different angle might work better if you go back.

MrEd
28-05-2007, 20:29
agree with all the above, maybe from a lower angle would make more impact, sorting of looking across the gate and along to the trees rather than just on a level with it and that wacking great post. maybe get a bit closer aswell

barcly
15-07-2007, 22:42
Cheers thx for the advice