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[tank]

A poster from a recent Paris trip.

http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs18/f/2007/149/7/2/Banned_Advertisment_by_tankphoto.jpg

Please let me know what you think


tank

[Steep]

It's sharp and well exposed so technically good, If you hadn't given it a title I don't think I'd have got it though, can you pop back to Paris and take it again with more of the guys face showing ;)

[oldgit]

Steep... you been following my training course?
Can't fault your comments

[Marcel]

I agree with Steep. Technically its well executed. Sharp and well exposed.

Subject wise, it doesnt personally grab me, although I'm sure there will be others that enjoy the juxtaposition of the elements.

If I was to be critical, I would say the horizontal bar at the top is quite distracting, taking the focus of my eye away from the poster and the vertical bars.

[Susane]

To quote Tanks sig; the lunatics have taken over the asylumNaughty boys! :lol:

[tank]

I know the bars arent line up straight but i lines myself up with the poster to try and make that the real focal point.

thanks for the comments.

[matty]

i like the idea certainly and agree with Steep, good idea, well taken, but could be just a bit better.

[Jonnyreb]

I like it - the title makes you think and the shot is, excepting the crop which i'd prefer much tighter, well executed. I like that one eye is obscured - it adds interest and a bleakness. :thumbs:

[Susane]

To quote Tanks sig; Naughty boys! :lol:

To clarify my odd post; I've tried all the usual tricks but...I still can't see a photo! :bang: I thought you guys couldn't either and were having a laugh :D