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marcus
07-06-2007, 20:27
i need as much feeback as i can get, these are a few i have:

http://farm1.static.flickr.com/229/520295875_c24f45fe41.jpg?v=0

http://farm1.static.flickr.com/213/507513086_f127186bee.jpg?v=0

http://farm1.static.flickr.com/211/502353648_bfec1178a3.jpg?v=0

Steep
07-06-2007, 20:30
Your tags are wrong they should be [img ]http etc.[/img ]

I've put spaces after the img so it will show up.

/edit after looking at the pictures, they all seem to be very small, too small to really see.

Keltic Ice Man
07-06-2007, 20:30
http://farm1.static.flickr.com/229/520295875_c24f45fe41_m.jpg

http://farm1.static.flickr.com/213/507513086_f127186bee_m.jpg

http://farm1.static.flickr.com/211/502353648_bfec1178a3_m.jpg

Hope that helps :)

marcus
07-06-2007, 20:32
haha thanks :)

and i'll enlarge them

marcus
08-06-2007, 07:45
anyone else care to give some advice?
i took these with an Olympus FE-140.

h.r.ford
08-06-2007, 08:15
Hmm some interesting pics there. I like one. It is different, and artsy and uses shadow and blown highlights well. I have a feeling though it will be one that people either love or hate. I think 3 is interesting although I'm not quite sure what you are trying to get across and it is a bit dark in the lower right hand corner. 2 is just lovely.

moomike
08-06-2007, 12:59
I really like the simplicity & atmosphere of the 1st (the public bridleway of no return stylee :lol:) just feel that it could benefit from a tiny bit more space at the base of the frame to balance it out.
2nd is very well taken, the exposure looks spot on, the colours are really nice & intense - could possibly use a silhouette focal point to the right of the image though like a building or something like that IMO.
I agree with Renee about the 3rd, the background doesn't really do anything for me.

Overall I think that the 1st & 2nd show a lot of promise & I look forward to seeing more :thumbs:

marcus
08-06-2007, 16:14
thanks a lot for the help, i cant wait to get a new camera, as i dont have one at the moment. its so frustrating seeing all the things that can be photographed, and i just cant take any