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Tsukiyomi
11-06-2007, 20:55
http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1101/540805699_056833bf1c_o.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/maxmolyneux/540805699/)

Personally I feel this Is fuzzy and I could better.

Thanks for any constructive criticism If posted.

Grant
11-06-2007, 22:18
I think it's just the floor that spoils an otherwise quite eye catching shot!

Tsukiyomi
11-06-2007, 22:31
I used High pass for In 32 bit channel In Photoshop CS2 for the floor to look like It Is, I thought that was the better half of the picture.

I still have the original shots to merge so I'm going to have a few more goes.

petemc
11-06-2007, 23:07
The floor is very detailed in comparison to the rest of the shot. I think it detracts quite a bit. I'm not entirely sure the composition works well either. It may have been better to go for a head on shot. 2/3rds wall, 1/3rd floor. Its entirely possible you could get a similar result from adjusting the levels in Photoshop to increase the contrast.

Grendel
11-06-2007, 23:26
I actually really like the wall itself in this shot, very striking with nice colours but I agree with what's already been said about the floor, it's just a bit too overpowering

Tsukiyomi
11-06-2007, 23:52
Had another go and I agree with the floor, just couldn't get the graffiti In fully without the floor showing, when I took It.

http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1101/540805699_5fe0ee2048_o.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/maxmolyneux/540805699/)

Tsukiyomi
12-06-2007, 00:19
Think I'll just keep It on my flickr anyway as a learning experience.