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..MD..
17-06-2007, 08:27
Couple i took this morning any comments welcome..

good or bad im here to learn :naughty:

http://www.talkphotography.co.uk/gallery/data/862/garden-birds02.jpg

http://www.talkphotography.co.uk/gallery/data/862/garden-birds-01.jpg

CT
17-06-2007, 09:09
Well done! The only thing I'd say about these two is they're both a little central in the frame. Try a different crop - unless they're full frame of course. :)

..MD..
17-06-2007, 09:32
:thumbs: cheers for the comments cedric. they were both uncropped.
heres another with a slight crop .

i did a little less pp on this as im not sure about the other two any thoughts

:shrug:


http://www.talkphotography.co.uk/gallery/data/862/garden-birds.jpg

:suspect:

CT
17-06-2007, 09:41
That's better framing Dave. I prefer the colour in the first two as being more representative of the colours in starling feathers.They're possibly a little too saturated, but it's largely a matter of taste. I tend to keep an eye out for the greens looking a bit 'Amazon rain forest' which is often a good indication.

CT
17-06-2007, 09:47
My preference would be for something like this...

http://www.talkphotography.co.uk/gallery/data/530/garden-birds1.jpg

If it's shot in RAW I'd go back to the RAW file and see if you can just reduce those highlights a little. :)

Les McLean
17-06-2007, 09:52
I like the one with less PP, the first two feel a little harsh ( I know it's always difficult getting the right balance with dark feathers)

..MD..
17-06-2007, 10:29
cheers for the c+c chaps
thought id try this see if it works any better

http://www.talkphotography.co.uk/gallery/data/862/garden-birds0026.jpg

thats me done for a while thanks for looking:clap:

CT
17-06-2007, 10:30
Tons better!! :thumbs:

dod
17-06-2007, 10:44
I like the one with less PP, the first two feel a little harsh ( I know it's always difficult getting the right balance with dark feathers)

same here

Cobra
17-06-2007, 11:14
Agreed the last one is the best IMHO

ed34
18-06-2007, 21:15
well done dave:thumbs:
agree last one is better:thumbs: