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lecurie
19-06-2007, 21:38
This is the first attept for me, as its the first time my daughter holly would stand still!

http://www.talkphotography.co.uk/gallery/data/500/thumbs/bounceoptimise.jpg (http://www.talkphotography.co.uk/gallery/showphoto.php?photo=14549)

any pointers where im going wrong?

ron boon
19-06-2007, 21:40
:clap: Lovely shot, very natural and full of life. Needs some light into the eyes, either as fill flash or reflector - popped a bit of light in

http://i156.photobucket.com/albums/t4/ronboon/bounceoptimise.jpg

lecurie
20-06-2007, 11:02
thanks for the tip Ron!

minimeeze
20-06-2007, 19:20
It's a lovely shot. I like the composition, and as Ron Boon has pointed out, just needed a bit of life breathing into the eyes.

oldgit
20-06-2007, 19:52
:agree: ... and a clean T-shirt

lecurie
20-06-2007, 21:27
:agree: ... and a clean T-shirt
thats what happens when you let a 2 year old feed herself!

when i took the picture how is it best to brighten the eyes slightly?

oldgit
20-06-2007, 21:37
selective mask around both eyes (additive), feather say 10 pix, then levels or curves to fettle

ron boon
22-06-2007, 20:15
or simply use the dodge tool set to about 10% with a large brush size and gently brush over the area:)

kingy
22-06-2007, 20:27
Nice pic mate, she looks like a bundle of trouble :)

lecurie
23-06-2007, 07:26
Nice pic mate, she looks like a bundle of trouble :)

Ill get a bit of rest on the 29th eh Kingy?

roll on the HET!

kingy
23-06-2007, 08:22
Ill get a bit of rest on the 29th eh Kingy?

roll on the HET!

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