First Pic upload to TP

[ifotou]

Ok here's my first upload of pictures to TP.

Model is Holly (and her Boyfriend Chris) taken in a local Multi storey car park.

C+C welcomed :)

http://www.ifotou.co.uk/blog/files/ifotou_278T0142.jpg

http://www.ifotou.co.uk/blog/files/ifotou_278T0146.jpg

http://www.ifotou.co.uk/blog/files/ifotou_278T0158.jpg

[oldgit]

colours a bit washed out and green tinged.
some of the whites are blown out.. oops.
Posing and framing are pretty good

[ifotou]

re green tinged, they have all been cross processed was a deliberate look, re some of the white blown out - again part of the look i was aiming for :) (probably should have explained that earlier lol )

the aim was for something different from the norm.

[Lady Pitstop]

I like your style - good location:thumbs:

not keen the models leg position in #1 though.

[ifotou]

I like your style - good location:thumbs:

not keen the models leg position in #1 though.


Thanks and yeah legs are a bit iffy in #1

[Messiah Khan]

Nice shots. I really love the colouring and pp work, althouhg I think the whites in No.2 are a tiny bit too blown out. I would have liked to see them bright white, but retaining some texture as I feel this would help pull the attention to the model more. Nice model as well.

[alexisonfire]

Love your style, if i was doing portrait work it would be very similar. Like no.2!

[InaGlo]

Really like the last two and the way in which you processed.
Gorgeous model!
Look forward to seeing more of your pics.

[ShawWellPete]

I love the composition of all of them but would like to see a bit more highlight detail, particularly on the second shot. The third is my favourite.

[Jas]

I too like the composition and poses of all three and have no issues with the 'high key' nature of of the pics. Second one is just slightly spoilt by the hair over her face (accepted hard to control outdoors) therefore the third just shades it for me.

[Jo]

I love the last one! And I do like your style :thumbs:

[ifotou]

Thanks folks much appreciated :)

[goatee]

I really love them. I'm afraid to say that I think the one with Chris in is spoilt by his presence. They're quite stark shots, and he just looks too normal and happy.

[ifotou]

thanks for the comments, lol at the comment about Chris, lol yeah he does a little was funny as it took us ages to persuade him to get in front of the camera too :D

[goatee]

Next time, can you ask Chris to hold a reflector, just to get some more detail into the shadowed side of her face?

[ifotou]

Next time, can you ask Chris to hold a reflector, just to get some more detail into the shadowed side of her face?


LOL i might do that

[Les McLean]

These are different, pushing the envelope , but I definitely like them , I'd perhaps clone the white lines on the floor in the first, they distract a touch?

[ifotou]

yeah the arrows in the foirst are a pain

thanks

[JPS]

I like them, very up to date looking........ :)