im back

[photomad]

im back with a new attitude!!!!!!!!!


http://www.talkphotography.co.uk/gallery/data/500/b_and_g_1.jpg






be honest and i will accept it

[matty]

not bad at all, tighter crop on the B&G though, so as to loose the cars in the background, and clone out the one that will be seen

[photomad]

thanx for that.

i noticed the cars when i posted it

i think i need to look at the pics 20 times before i post

thanx for replying so quick

i was a prat last night

[oldgit]

yep needs a closer crop, then may be some car cloning.
Might also want to fiddle with the levels and sats a bit to add a bit more punch
Will be pretty good then.

[Grendel]

im back with a new attitude!!!!!!!!!



:thumbs: Good on ya ;)

I agree with Matty re the crop but it's a much nicer photo than yesterday's one. The pose looks very relaxed and natural. With the suggested crop that could make a lovely framed print for the mantle piece.

[photomad]

cheers folks


i feel bad bout yesterdays posts got a bit carried away.


i know i need help and hope you all forgive me and my sillyness

[Grendel]

cheers folks


i feel bad bout yesterdays posts got a bit carried away.


i know i need help and hope you all forgive me and my sillyness

Consider it forgotten :) Just remember we're all here to help each other improve and that can only be done by pointing out things we see that can be improved :D Glad you're still with us :)

[DarknFuzzy]

I agee with the more knowledgable people above, a tighter crop will make it much better.

By the way, does anyone else think that tree looks like it's about to come alive and eat the happy couple? Maybe I have just had too much coffee this morning?:nuts:

[Grendel]

By the way, does anyone else think that tree looks like it's about to come alive and eat the happy couple? Maybe I have just had too much coffee this morning?:nuts:

lol i can see what you mean, but then I too have had rather a lot of caffine this morning :geek: :gag: :D

[InaGlo]

I too agree on the tighter crop being needed.

See how close the couple are ... almost huddled together?
It really emphasises all that empty space around them and the intrusions like the cars.

You have another wedding this Saturday right?
On the day just try and remmber some of the points peeps have made over the last few days to help you.

Weddings! :eek: .... youre braver than me thats for sure!

[Ewan]

Tons better than the last one :)

Just crop a bit closer to get rid of those cars, and it'll be very nice indeed :)

[moomike]

:agree: Very much better - agree about the cropping but aside from that this is a marked improvement.
Good on you for the new attitude & happy you're still posting :thumbs:

[JPS]

i noticed the cars when i posted it

i think i need to look at the pics 20 times before i post



May have been better if you'd got the B&G to move a metre or two to their right and move round with them, that way the cars wouldn't have been in the photo at the time of taking meaning less cloning to do afterwards. Always look for other ways to take the photo before pressing the shutter - distracting backgrounds ect. Makes life easier after the shoot.

[photomad]

thanx.

writing it all down.

got wedding on sat
weather looks promising.
dry sunny spells!!!

beautiful gardens and it all looks lush

checked it out again today and due to our glorious summer [ and i say the term summer losely ha ha] the flowers and grass have been well watered.

post pics when one and relaxed

[photomad]

thats done and relaxed

[Moos3h]

Also, it might be my screen, but the Bride's dress looks slightly blown out - perhaps a touch of exposure compensation might help keep the detail?

Cheers,
James

[-Oy-]

Also, it might be my screen, but the Bride's dress looks slightly blown out - perhaps a touch of exposure compensation might help keep the detail?

Cheers,
James

Yes - also note where the dress is blown - where the dress' train gets horizontal - therefore catching the sun more directly. Always check this part of the dress!