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photomad
05-07-2007, 17:13
a wedding gone by
what do you think???
http://www.talkphotography.co.uk/gallery/data/500/sandc.jpg
photomad
05-07-2007, 17:15
and anotherhttp://www.talkphotography.co.uk/gallery/data/500/sandc2.jpg
:shrug: :shrug: :shrug: :shrug:
any good????
busterboy
05-07-2007, 17:28
1st shot is over exposed and look at the wall at the back of the shot...:eek:
A tweak with the levels should bring out better colours and straighten it up.:D
Second shot looks fine other than the whites want toning down a little but much better.;)
Are we in a better mood tonight..:p
Second shot is fine. The first shot is way off level. It's easy enough to straighten up in processing, but you need to keep an eye on your horizontals and verticals in the viewfinder. :)
Jimmy_Lemon
05-07-2007, 17:29
I really like the second one! Looks well exposed to me and looks like a great location!
Both look pretty well exposed to me! Maybe the path on the first is a tiny bit over.
First shot is cool, only thing that bothers me is the lack of feet. Try crouching down next time?
Second one is great in my opinion. Nicely framed and well exposed - I can't fault it ;)
photomad
05-07-2007, 17:47
yes i am in a better mood thanks for asking .
last night was was my alter ego and shes not nice
thanks for comments guys
i will read and
:naughty: :naughty: :naughty:
:thinking: :thinking: :thinking: :D :D :D
photomad
05-07-2007, 17:49
location is oldway mansion
was built and owned by the singer family you know those guys who invented the sewing machine
2nd shot is by far the better shot, but you need to get closer.
photomad
05-07-2007, 18:05
bride wanted all the stairs in but i did take one closer in
thanks for advice
Jimmy_Lemon
05-07-2007, 18:05
2nd shot is by far the better shot, but you need to get closer.
I wouldnt go too much closer, maybe look a little from the bottom, but I like the staricase going up in the background
I mean in general. So far the 3 from the wedding have all needed crops imho, but she says she has them so :)
photomad
05-07-2007, 19:18
more cropping for me then
only cropped the one with stairs
the groom and best man was such a random shot i rather liked it but indeed it does need straightening.
i liked the old fashioned knackered wall but buster boy says 'no no no'
:shake: :shake: :shake:
i liked the old fashioned knackered wall but buster boy says 'no no no'
:shake: :shake: :shake:
Nothing wrong with he wall at all - I think it's the slant BB is referring to. ;)
photomad
06-07-2007, 08:49
ah! the slant all is clear now
yep its definatly slanting
more cropping for me then
I wouldn't say thats the answer as the picture quality will degrade. Its easily fixed by getting closer to your client or by zooming in, optically not digitally.
ah! the slant all is clear now
yep its definatly slanting
We all take slanting pics now and again, but it's quite a large slant you have there. It's easily correctable in processing but the more the slant, the more you have to crop the shot afterwards and you lose detail at the edges of your shot. It can be a problem if for instance you've composed fairly tightly on groups - you can end up chopping people off the ends.
Look for vertical and horizontal clues in your viewfinder -doors and window frames etc are a good indication with indoor shots.
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