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fraggle101
05-07-2007, 20:26
Cc on this one please.. Im not sure about the framing, or the crop, whatever you pro's call it.. lol..

It was taken in colour but i like it in B/W.. No need to be gentle.. i need to learn!! hehe..:wave:

http://www.talkphotography.co.uk/gallery/data/500/thumbs/IMG_0669_.jpg (http://www.talkphotography.co.uk/gallery/showphoto.php?photo=14867)

Oh! it came out all small!! iv not linked it correcly! :bonk: :bonk:

photomad
05-07-2007, 20:29
http://www.talkphotography.co.uk/gallery/data/500/IMG_0669_.jpg

photomad
05-07-2007, 20:31
hey
im getting good at this copy and pasting malarky ha ha

you would laugh if you could see the trouble the guys went to to help me took about three hours

the pic is great i like that its natural and b/w

fraggle101
05-07-2007, 20:33
Lol, thanks m8, i was going to just copy and paste the addy and leave out the quote marks, but saw the button 'copy to clipboard' so diod that.. should have done the first i guess!! hehe..

Thanks for the cc.. :bonk:

divine`
05-07-2007, 20:39
I think a touch more contrast would improve that a lot :)

oldgit
05-07-2007, 20:48
:lol: what a shot. a very characterful face.
I like it :thumbs:

fraggle101
05-07-2007, 20:50
Ok, i think i'll have a look ar that tomorrow, looking at it now i think the background is a bit buist.. also the bit of light by his right eye is distracting.. the over all out line of his face is a little lost.. is there a way of making his outline more defined??

fraggle101
05-07-2007, 20:52
:) Thx guys btw..

Character is one thing this guy has in bundles.. lol..

alexisonfire
05-07-2007, 23:26
I can't give much constructive criticism because i know nothing about portrait photography, but i like the shot. I would of processed it like this though...

http://img129.imageshack.us/img129/3268/laughterfc3.jpg

fraggle101
06-07-2007, 13:54
What did you do? more contrast?? when i first converted it i looked at it with more contrast but i prefered the slightly softer look.. makes him look a bit harsh! if you know what i mean.. i like the high contrast though! but not for him.. it was a happy moment in a normaly hard life.. its nice to see him happy..