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Pompey
06-07-2007, 07:32
C & C Very much welcome please
http://i204.photobucket.com/albums/bb93/pompey68/3060such-sorrow-med.jpg
oldgit
06-07-2007, 08:33
Urm...
Title doesnt fit the pic IMHO
Looks a tad soft/OOF
Arm with braclets is distracting.
Puz
06-07-2007, 13:56
It is a bit soft and the braclets as oldgit says distract. Also the shadow in the back doesn't help
Venomator
06-07-2007, 14:06
It has the potential to be a really nice portrait with a little attention to detail Pompey ... but :agree: she looks more DayDreamy than sorrowful imgo ... and I third the bracelets comments too ... :shrug:




:p
Rhodese
06-07-2007, 16:59
I like it, but as the others have commented it needs lifting, so I’ve had a little play what do you think?
http://www.rhodesesphotography.co.uk/USERIMAGES/3060such-sorrow-med2.jpg
Joe T
07-07-2007, 08:52
Rhodese I think there is now too much texture in her skin - it's not very flattering?
Steep
07-07-2007, 18:24
Wistful would fit it better as a title.
Henry
07-07-2007, 22:55
Nice work Rhodese, its getting there. She's pensive mood.
Pompey
08-07-2007, 15:17
Thanks for the comments guys.........this was taken with a point and shoot with just a 40w table lamp for lighting......so not by any means good.

Rhodese, that looks great, almost a 40's feel

Thanks again for your comments


Stay safe
Sean