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GT_Raven
14-07-2007, 21:36
thought id have a go at some lanscape/sunset photos
http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b250/readydready/2007_07140007-1.jpg
http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b250/readydready/2007_07140002.jpg
http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b250/readydready/crop-1.jpg
C&C appreciated
minimeeze
14-07-2007, 21:47
Really like the darkness of these shots - they feel quite moody. The last one is my favourite, although I'd be tempted to clone out the lights on the horizon as they spoil it. Shame about the wires too, but not alot you can do there.
Jonnyreb
14-07-2007, 22:09
The first is the weakest - the composition is poor and its quite noisy (probably notice more noise in this shot as your eye is looking for something to latch onto)
The second is good, but you could lose half the black foreground and a quarter of the sky to help it along.
The third is my favourite - good composition. As Cheryl pointed out there is some cloning you could do to improve it and there seems to be a nasty (grass?) in the foreground.
The colours in all three are great - lovely rich sunset :thumbs:
GT_Raven
14-07-2007, 22:27
thanks for the comments. what about the compostiton in the first is poor?, cannot see the grass you mentioned in the third one :S
Jonnyreb
15-07-2007, 09:27
Its a dull 50% sky, 50% land. The land is actualy so dark there is no detail; all the interest is in the sky so you should exploit that :)
GT_Raven
15-07-2007, 22:43
:) thanks for the advice
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