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jamie-dm
04-08-2007, 00:01
So - now for some 'indepth critique'!

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http://i197.photobucket.com/albums/aa166/jamiedm/Photography/th_e7159129.jpg (http://i197.photobucket.com/albums/aa166/jamiedm/Photography/e7159129.jpg)


Thanks
Jay
Susane
04-08-2007, 00:03
OOOps! you need to resize that jamie.:eek:
800 on the longest side.

Phew! thats better! :)
jamie-dm
04-08-2007, 19:47
Has anyone got an opinion on these photos???

Dont go easy on me *** I'm new!

Thanks
Jamie-dm
CT
04-08-2007, 21:04
1 and 2 remind me of a couple of Cartier-Bresson shots. I like No 2 with the women all equidistant as you look into the shot.

They're a might soft, but signs of a good eye there Jamie. :)
RobertP
04-08-2007, 21:08
You will probably do better if you resize them to 800 pixels so they can show in the thread - lazy bunch here ;)

I don't like mono so my comments would be biased :)

But anyway...
1. It's a staircase that leads your eye to... nothing. Needs a subject. Staircase itself is not enough.
2. really don't like this one. Burnt out sky and solid black shadows. Strange panorama crop.
3. best of the bunch. Might have been better a step or two to the left but the road leads you in and the people give some interest.
4. is kind of OK and I can even see why it might be presented in mono. Not sure you are getting the best detail from the brickwork.
RobertP
04-08-2007, 21:10
. I like No 2 with the women all equidistant as you look into the shot.



Do you mean #3? (did you notice #2 ? :) )
CT
04-08-2007, 21:11
LOL Yes - and No.:D
..MD..
04-08-2007, 21:13
:thinking:have to agree with robert on these i think " for me " he has hit the nail on the head on each shot...


:eek: and i like mono's
Bob
04-08-2007, 21:34
Its no 3 for me gives the feeling of a little Spannish back street we have all walked down at some time
Bob
Ewan
05-08-2007, 07:03
Its no 3 for me gives the feeling of a little Spannish back street we have all walked down at some time
Bob

I haven't :'(
photoretoucher
05-08-2007, 08:27
3rd image. Next time shoot it so the you only have the white tower and background.
Bob
05-08-2007, 20:50
I haven't :'(

Sorry Ewan :wave:you really must try to get out a little more and then you can walk down a little Spanish street may be we will pass each other as we walk by:lol:
Bob:bonk:
jamie-dm
07-08-2007, 21:52
Yeah they are a bit soft as ive compressed them a few times.

Bob, thats exactly what it is! Little street in menorca :p !
PaulDCocker
08-08-2007, 08:17
I love the complexity of the lines in 4, would have loved to see a shot of just the roof maybe?
benneh
13-08-2007, 21:07
3 and 4 I like :).

3 could do without the lamp at the top, and as RobertP said maybe a step or two to the left to draw me in a little more.

4 I like in a smaller size but it doesn't seem to have the detail for a larger size/print. Personally (because it has a lot of promise) I would go back with a tripod and shoot focused on the front window, with a smaller depth of field. Then probably do some dodging/burning in PS. Nice image though.