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ConfusedChicca
08-08-2007, 13:23
Been asked to do some shots of some friends and their children, and some informal shots at a wedding on Friday.. so I would like some in depth C &C on the pics below, just so I know where I'm going wrong.
Feel free to edit the pics, but please let me know what you do to them so I can have a go at doing it myself!

http://i135.photobucket.com/albums/q142/Chicca-Babe/IMG_1098.jpg
http://i135.photobucket.com/albums/q142/Chicca-Babe/IMG_1103.jpg
http://i135.photobucket.com/albums/q142/Chicca-Babe/IMG_0884.jpg
http://i135.photobucket.com/albums/q142/Chicca-Babe/IMG_0794.jpg
http://i135.photobucket.com/albums/q142/Chicca-Babe/IMG_1198.jpg

Sorry if you've seen these before, I have posted a couple of eon here already on different forums I think, but I'm at the point of needing more detailed comments and criticisms about them.

Laura

dod
08-08-2007, 18:38
the stand out shot here for me is the second one, good composition, great colour, interesting subject with the patterns and reflections.

#1's a bit little to comment on but it doesn't really look like it has any focal point really.

#3 has pretty good depth of field, compositions not bad, looks maybe a wee bit soft but that could just be compression.

#4 has good colour, looks sharp enough, decent record shot of what looks to be a variety of geranium.

#5 doesn't do a lot for me. White flower, plonked right in the middle of the frame, not big enough to really get your attention, leaf at the top distracting.

ConfusedChicca
09-08-2007, 07:05
Thanks, you've been a big help.