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Outerfocus
19-03-2011, 15:32
Not great I know but enjoyed the experience
Mal

http://www.talkphotography.co.uk/gallery/data/500/Sunset_Kinmel_11.jpg

http://www.talkphotography.co.uk/gallery/data/500/Kinmel_Beach_4.jpg

Any any helpful advice accepted

Outerfocus
19-03-2011, 19:59
Ive got broad shoulders !!

Well quite broad :bonk:
Mal

hunter20ga
19-03-2011, 20:25
No. 2 first...
positives: the photographer practicing his craft, relative position of the sun, and the colors; also like the low perspective from behind the photographer. I think this shot has been well conceived and executed except for...

cons: I think the horizon is akilter and needs to be straightened, and there's a distinct halo around the photographer.

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No. 1...not as strong a photo as number 2; horizon is straight, but there's nothing of great interest (or even modest interest, in the foreground. Overall, the photo is too dark for my taste; I'd like to see more detail and less shadow. The low hills on the left have a halo, it appears.

Positives, though....nice colors; good concept, and kudos for getting out and taking some photos!

But...

Outerfocus
19-03-2011, 22:58
Thank you some good points to follow up on Ta:thumbs:

Mal