View Full Version : Couple of shots :)
dd-photography
22-08-2007, 15:44
These are two of my first ever pictures, and i do like them just wonder what you think.
Im 17 and have only been taking photos for around a month.
:)
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x83/atticphotography/Southsea.jpg
This one is Southsea in Portsmouth where I live.
http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x83/atticphotography/LondonEye.jpg
This is the London Eye taken when I spent a week in london about 3 days after I got my camera.
unclerichy
22-08-2007, 17:31
Like the first one :thumbs: - interesting textures all round. I can't decide whether the pole on the right balances the photo or is in the way :shrug: and I'd be tempted to clone out the boats on the horizon.
Your lens looks like it needs a thorough clean :D
mobilevirgin
22-08-2007, 17:35
They're nice - you're certainly on the right lines. There's a similar London Eye pic in my flickr stream. I think they both show some pretty good composition ideas. The border does nothing for the 1st one though.
dd-photography
22-08-2007, 18:31
thankyou, and on the lens cleaning tip off, how do i do it!? ive got a UV filter on my lens so i guess its just that which needs cleaning.
Thanks for the CC though :)
daftbugga
22-08-2007, 20:11
dd
the best thing for cleaning a lens,or filter is to blow some air on it with a rocket blower or canned air if you want to be posh that gets rid of dust/grit e.t.c .
if that gets rid of the muck then leave it at that.
if more thorough cleaning is needed then eclipse solution & pec pads do the job nicely.
Quite a good composition in the first one. Just a little bit chopped off the sky at the top and get them boats to come a bit closer and it would have been perfect :)
dd-photography
23-08-2007, 23:29
Ah thanks for the compliment Rob and cheers daft for the lens help!
Ill definatly do that, ill get a lens cleaning kit as soon as I can get to the shop!
:)
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