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Seppi3
24-08-2007, 13:47
Water of Leith

http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1076/1205379713_8d9471ec40.jpg?v=0


Dean Gallery

http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1031/1205377845_c2aee79eea.jpg?v=0

Water of Leith

http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1058/1205351133_bf49a8b572.jpg?v=0

Water of Leith walkway

http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1165/1205356653_f0117cfc80.jpg?v=0

kendo
24-08-2007, 20:04
Joe,

The Dean Gallery in my opinion is the best of the lot here.

The 2nd Water of Leith shot would have been better with log over to the right of the frame giving it somewhere to "fall into". A slower shutter speed to give some movement blur to the waterfall would also have helped.

The Water of Leith Walkway does lead into the frame but to me it just stops in the centre.

Get the tripod out and redo the water at a slower shutter speed.

Seppi3
24-08-2007, 20:17
Thanks Ken,

I will try again, as you stated in previous post its due to rain next week!!!

HIMUPNORTH
24-08-2007, 21:55
Not bad, but lacking any real strong composition in all except the Dean gallery. It is a shame however that the foliage "touches" the gallery, this could have been avoided and would give a little more space to the arrangement. the "fallen over" person doesn't help either.;)

Looking forward to seeing the next lot. :thumbs: