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tank
03-09-2007, 23:22
These shots were taken whilst i was fixing upa hosue in france. We took some time out and went for a swim in the lake. I took these shots and then edited them to try and show the tiredness and how drained we felt from all the work. (we are students remember:lol:)

C & C welcome

http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y262/wevs/DSC_0470.jpg


http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y262/wevs/DSC_0471.jpg

moomike
03-09-2007, 23:30
The 1st shot is excellent mate, great tones & composition imo :thumbs:

2nd doesn't quite work for me if I'm honest, can see what you were going for but I find the paint around the nose a bit distracting from that angle & the towel looks a bit like a funky hairstyle (please don't take offence at that :lol:)

1st shot is spot on though :clap:

Mohain
04-09-2007, 10:29
Actually I think I prefer No.2. Really like them both *** :)

oldgit
04-09-2007, 11:08
1st is the better of the 2 IMHO composition wise