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Snake Man
14-11-2007, 20:58
Taken Sunday.

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2414/1973366697_7d51badcff_b.jpg
RobertP
14-11-2007, 21:31
The real thing might not make you dizzy but you would think so from the blur and the angle :)

Works quite well.
Alex S
14-11-2007, 21:34
I like the idea and execution but not the composition. Too much going on on the right hand side compared to the left, IMO, perhaps a crop? The blue colour is fantastic though.
Smud9ie
15-11-2007, 22:13
I agree that there maybe a little too much empty, unused space on the left hand side. Worth cropping?
great image all the same, well done :thumbs:
Snake Man
16-11-2007, 09:52
Thanks for the feedback. Here is the cropped version. Any better?

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g86/mranaconda/eye2.jpg
Gandhi
16-11-2007, 11:15
Slightly better. It's a great idea but as above. I don't think the off-kilter composition does anything for it. It would work better to my mind at normal angles.

But that's just me.
Snake Man
16-11-2007, 16:45
^^^ Always appreciate the honesty. Worth a try though eh.
Gandhi
16-11-2007, 18:45
Definately.

But what's important is if YOU are happy with it! Our opinions are just that, opinions.

Peer review is a great thing but you can find with places like camera clubs and forums, that those opinions can become rather homogenised. You could post it here and everybody will give it the thumbs up then post somewhere else and it'll get ripped to shreds.

***'s important is developing a style of your own and then convincing everybody that it's great ;) (who's MArtin PArr?)