New Portraits - I think I'm getting better. :)

[syeuk2002]

Hi All,

I've been taking a few portrait shots recently.
I think I'm improving a fair bit.

See my last portrait post...
http://www.talkphotography.co.uk/forums/showthread.php?t=33795

I'd love to hear any opinions / advice you have. :)

http://tn3-1.deviantart.com/fs24/300W/i/2007/348/3/2/Ad_and_Ryan_3_by_syeuk2002.jpg
FULL VIEW > http://syeuk2002.deviantart.com/art/Ad-and-Ryan-3-72131848

http://tn3-2.deviantart.com/fs23/300W/i/2007/348/6/e/Ad_and_Ryan_2_by_syeuk2002.jpg
FULL VIEW > http://syeuk2002.deviantart.com/art/Ad-and-Ryan-2-72131815

http://tn3-1.deviantart.com/fs24/300W/i/2007/348/4/8/Ad_and_Ryan_1_by_syeuk2002.jpg
FULL VIEW > http://syeuk2002.deviantart.com/art/Ad-and-Ryan-1-72131729

http://tn3-1.deviantart.com/fs22/300W/i/2007/348/f/f/Evalyn_and_Brian_by_syeuk2002.jpg
FULL VIEW > http://syeuk2002.deviantart.com/art/Evalyn-and-Brian-72132354

Thanks for you time.

Simon :)

[Slapo]

Check your white balance in the last one.
For the rest, more diffused lighting would be nicer.
They're quite OK otherwise, I think.