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CarlukeDave
26-12-2007, 22:25
Like the title says!
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2091/2139410492_a9cc14c6e3.jpg
1/60 f5.6 focal length 300mm ISO400
Just messing about today with the Tamron 70-300mm.
dellipher
26-12-2007, 22:36
I quite like the image. I would have liked to have seen it on a plain white background [but we all cannot have everything. lol]
I think the image could benefit from a crop, and maybe being lightened in levels and perhaps a bit more saturation.
Or another idea is to selective colour just the two pencils which are in focus?
Just ideas :)
wow adele getting good at this lol
i did something similar a while back, think using 1st pencil as focus piont works better
This shot must have been done a gazillion times, but there's nowt wrong with that, it's a useful exercise in colour and DOF. I suspect this was shot on a white bg with a wrong wb setting under tungsten light, with the result that you've lost all the potential zingy colour and the shot looks a bit drab and lacking in contrast.
I had a quick play with it and adjusted the colour balance and levels a touch but it's nowhere near as good as if you'd got it right in camera.
http://www.talkphotography.co.uk/gallery/data/1269/2139410492_a9cc14c6e3-edit.jpg
dellipher
27-12-2007, 19:10
wow adele getting good at this lol
Thanks I think? lol.
Its only cos I was having a play about with the image, but didnt sumbit anything on here for comparison, cos I didnt have the time to do it neat/well...lol
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