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HannahC
29-12-2007, 17:32
Ok, so bare with me, I've only just joined.
This is a picture I've taken on my new camera (canon G9)

It was taken inside the St. Albans Abbey, where we (our family) do a traditional walk round every Boxing Day

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2279/2138941668_b79da8d2f0_o.jpg

cya Hannah

EdinburghGary
29-12-2007, 17:35
I like it, but not keen on the sign with the red border! It ruins an otherwise lovely scene.

AlisonD
29-12-2007, 17:48
It's a super capture - and I see what you mean EdinburghGary - it does 'hurt' that side of the image.
I love the peaceful feeling from this photo...

Well done - as I know you are just starting out doing your photography.

antc
30-12-2007, 22:14
I like it, but not keen on the sign with the red border! It ruins an otherwise lovely scene.

Agreed, recrop without the sign and I think it would look much better.

Jade
30-12-2007, 22:43
Agreed, recrop without the sign and I think it would look much better.

I like the fact the signs there maybe you could turn the red saturation down ?

just an idea
great show though love it.

Jade

CarlukeDave
31-12-2007, 11:59
Good shot, agree that a crop to take out the sign, but otherwise a good photo.

HannahC
02-01-2008, 18:00
I've finally recropped the image!
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2411/2159111198_cbdd57d90f_o.jpg

is that better?

cya Hannah

Cuddy
02-01-2008, 23:43
yes Hannah big improvement.

AlisonD
02-01-2008, 23:47
Great - well done, that works much better :thumbs:

Remember - you can always crop those little 'nasties' out of a pic ! :)

kelack
03-01-2008, 23:04
I've got to say, I do prefer the cropped version, the pillars on the right were also a bit distracting.

Hope you don't mind but you had the edit box ticked so I had a little play, I've just sharpened it a bit and "warmified" it. You might think it looks poop though :lol:

http://lh6.google.co.uk/kelack/R31puDjABHI/AAAAAAAADiU/_UJO7JI9kuM/s800/2159111198_cbdd57d90f_o.jpg

Sheep
03-01-2008, 23:09
Has it been oversharpened now looks a bit grainy?

DCCD
03-01-2008, 23:35
I like the Kelack rework, but something in between that and the original would be spot on.
Kelack's shows a bit more background detail which I like, and the orignal lacks.

kelack
06-01-2008, 11:02
Possibly did get a bit enthusiastic with the sharpening methinks. Thanks for the comments though

Charlie C
06-01-2008, 18:13
go for a B&W conversion, that could look great if u got it right.

Nice pic nonetheless, good job.

HannahC
07-01-2008, 15:41
ok B&W
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2206/2174769699_5ba201b017_o.jpg

a1ex2001
07-01-2008, 16:48
Black and White looks nice and works weel with the subject, the other edit is definately a bit over sharpened so somweher bettween that and the origional if you want to keep it in colour