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Mayer71
12-01-2008, 21:03
http://www.talkphotography.co.uk/gallery/data/500/AA.jpg
Betty
12-01-2008, 21:05
Honestly? I think it looks like you've cut a model out of a bridal magazine and stuck her on a new background.

What effect were you hoping for? :)
Mayer71
12-01-2008, 21:16
Honestly? I think it looks like you've cut a model out of a bridal magazine and stuck her on a new background.

What effect were you hoping for? :)

Thanx. gradient back ground.
mmcp42
12-01-2008, 21:41
not sure
it nearly works,
but can't say what's wrong :thinking:
Borats Baby
12-01-2008, 21:48
I like her hair !
InaGlo
12-01-2008, 21:58
I think the the bg is too contrasty, it fights too much for your attention, Id either do it again and tone it down,
or at least blur/soften what you have a little bit.
Between the brides inner arm/body .. your forgot to desat the bg.
You have too many contrasting areas of skin here, her upper body is quite golden, while the make-up on her face has paled her. Her legs are very blotchy. Personally Id try and smooth this a little.
All jmo of course. :)