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Duckydoodle
16-01-2008, 16:07
Wandering through a very old graveyard I came across this grave which looked so uncared for apart from the red flowers placed on top. Had a try at B&W conversion with selective colouring to highlight my thoughts on it's sad, solitary state!


http://www.talkphotography.co.uk/gallery/data/1327/Touch_of_red_copy1.jpg

mmcp42
16-01-2008, 16:53
hmmm not sure
I see what you're aiming at, not sure it worked this time - sorry

Duckydoodle
16-01-2008, 16:55
Thanks for looking. Don't be sorry not sure myself that's why I put it up here :)

Helium_Junkie
16-01-2008, 16:55
It's a little too brightly coloured I think for the mood of the photo, try desaturating the flowers just a tiny bit...
Nice idea :)

Venomator
16-01-2008, 17:13
:agree: ... and while you are at it you might try and add some contrast to the B & W range as it looks a little ... :thinking: ... flat ... :shrug:

Great concept and just needs a little tweaking to improve ... ;)





:p

JPS
16-01-2008, 17:24
Nice idea, I like selective colouring in photos - although I think it may have worked better if the sky wasn't so bright and so prominent in the photo.

sbowler579
16-01-2008, 19:32
As above, slightly higher angle to reduce the skies prominence.

Duckydoodle
16-01-2008, 19:55
Thank you all for taking a look and for the advice which I appreciate and will take on board :)