Fiona v2.0

[mole2k]

I had another quick go at external lighting, just bounced off the walls. Id love some critique on the lighting and any tips on how I could reduce the hotspot on the cheek. Im aware of the hairs on the forehead, this was taken after midnight in a rush as its for the strobist bootcamp assignment 1 which is due today.

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2022/2200939684_3c5f726e7e_o.jpg
Canon 20D
Canon EF 50 f1.8
Vivitar 823

iso100, 50mm, f2, 1/250th

[moomike]

I'd try to introduce a tad more angle/variation with your flashguns as you've achieved very even, flat lighting which seems to have removed some 3D'ness (that's a word...:lol:) from the portrait.
Angling a diffused flash more should introduce a tad more definition - maybe also try bouncing the flash from the ceiling & using a reflector to bring some light to more shaded areas when using this technique.
Looking forward to seeing where you're headed with this :thumbs:

[BigBaldBob]

I agree with the above comments, and also IMHO I think shooting from a slightly higher angle would have been a little more flattering to her.