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i was asked if i could do some shots for gabrielle's mom.
so i said ill try my best..:suspect:
this is what i came back with ..:shrug:
any thoughts would be greatfully recived.
gabby 1
http://www.talkphotography.co.uk/gallery/data/861/GABBY-3.jpg
gabby 2
http://www.talkphotography.co.uk/gallery/data/861/GABBY-2.jpg
gabby 3
http://www.talkphotography.co.uk/gallery/data/861/GABBY-1.jpg
c+c always wanted + needed
thanks for looking
md:thumbs:
Venomator
20-01-2008, 10:33
They are really cute Dave ... :thumbs: ... and the poses are super ... any Mum would be pleased I think ... :D
They do look as though they could stand a little more saturation and possibly dimming down the brightness a tad ... :shrug:
:p
They look super cute Dave, but [and this might just be my screen, so excuse me if I am wrong] they look a bit too pale, over lightened, to me? :shrug: I am just comparing them to the ones in your sig, and look like they could be taken back just a little to give a wee bit more definition. As a mum of daughters though, I would have loved any of those pics gracing a picture frame :thumbs:
not too bad there dave .. just watch the lighting on the pictures right hand side...
:thumbs: imo
King of Groove
20-01-2008, 14:09
I like them but not keen on a white background.
I agree. The pics are lovely but a bit too bright.
dellipher
20-01-2008, 14:37
Hi MD
I cant help but agree with some *** that these look really light - rather than bright - and "high key" shots arent always everyones cup of tea.
I have just had a play with the hue and saturation and the levels slightly.
What did they come out like straight from the camera?
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2238/2206457990_9f1e7b8e50_o.jpg
Great poses MD:thumbs:
but I do agree that they look a little light and I am not too keen on the white background either, maybe a few toys or something would have broken it up a little ?
thank you all for your honesty.. " even though you dont like the white look"
i can see what your saying now..:D
hope these two look alittle better :shrug:
http://www.talkphotography.co.uk/gallery/data/861/GABBY-9-finished-copy.jpg
http://www.talkphotography.co.uk/gallery/data/861/GABBY-landscape-copy.jpg
many thanks
md:thumbs:
again please be honest:naughty:
Venomator
20-01-2008, 18:42
Much, much better imhgo Dave ... :thumbs:
See you got the name right in the end too ... ;)
:p
Excellent shots - her expressions are priceless for any mummy x
Not into this style of Photo making however, because I take Photographs I as we all do have fallen into my own little niche, so what I can say is, before I started taking Photographs, had someone presented me with these pictures of any of my children, I would have been thrilled to bits. I like the originals you posted, yes they might be a little 'soft' but, appropriately so, she is a little soft and cute baby girl, and so it goes. Very cute and I'm sure the Mum is overjoyed.
:thumbs: much prefer second edits Dave, I like the white background, just thought the originals were overly light, now they look much better :clap:
melbster
21-01-2008, 13:25
aahhh and once again aahhhh..
No 1 is a belter Dave, what a great capture.:clap:
Just out of interest what camera settings did you use for the shot ?
Edited versions for me too... Maybe next time try toning down that right flash a little to help? A lovely set, she will be well pleased!
lovely shots MD :thumbs:
the only thing I have noticed is 2 little black specs to the bottom left of the subject, on the first 2.
aahhh and once again aahhhh..
No 1 is a belter Dave, what a great capture.:clap:
Just out of interest what camera settings did you use for the shot ?
:thinking:
im out at the moment but i think it was
f / 16
250 th
iso 100
hth
md:thumbs:
Love the pose in the 1st shot the edited version is great :thumbs: A lovely picture for her parents to hang on the wall and be chuffed with :clap:
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