Monica

[jamesward93]

A shot taken from a shoot with Monica today. No PP yet other than to crop and resize for web C+C welcome.

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3174/2289391044_51e5dd0562_o.jpg

[30psi]

Its nice.

I don't think I like the reflection of what I assume to be a lamp in the her left glasses lens though.

[james_death]

As stated the lamp reflection is a shame love the pose and those lips stand out great stuff

[jamesward93]

Thanks for your comments, although i personally feel that without the catchlight in the glasses the image lacks some life. I have some more that i will try and post later

[Brittany Alyse]

I looove this :)

[jamesward93]

Thanks Brittany. I promise i will get some more from this shoot posted in the next few days

[yourapocalypse]

Great pose but I reckon it's a little bit dark, the crop's off (too tight on the RHS and the top of her head), and the light in the glasses is distracting.

[paulc]

I just love this image..the pose the catchlight an all.

[Charlie C]

really really nice image, but y chop the top of the head off?

[jamesward93]

Great pose but I reckon it's a little bit dark.

I agree with this, i have done some work on this image now and will post tonight.

but y chop the top of the head off?

Hmm, i have had a few comments about cutting off the top of a head on some of my images. I think if you look at a lot of fashion images, you will see that tops pf heads have been cropped. I feel its because the image is more about the clothes and the look than the actual model themselves. I know it doesn't suit everyone and probably doesn't work in every image, but i personally feel that this one does work. :)

[radiantvision]

I find glasses distracting. Head is badly cut (and I am sure model has this part of the head ;) Pose is good though. This girl feels the vibe. Show us more! :D

[Diego Garcia]

I like it.

The left arm leads nicely, it shows off the clothes, the poise is excellent and her skin is stunning. Nice work.

[jamesward93]

another one from this series, more to come.......:D

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3196/2298995094_351b3f7419_o.jpg

[jamesward93]

and another.......

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3206/2299024308_99f09683c1_o.jpg

[FranchiseJuan]

The last two are much better then the first.

What are you actually trying to show here?

The reflection in the glasses are fine. Are you only using one light here? That last image you are getting quite nice separation from the background on the right side, but the left side is a tad dark.

Oh and you do realize that the background is a different colour in the three shots right?

[Jozza]

the crop's off (too tight on the RHS and the top of her head)

I like the tight crop to the right but I agree with cropping the head!

LOVE the last one you've posted - Perfect! :thumbs:

[radiantvision]

Aargh... Glasses :/

[fraggle101]

i really like these pictures, its just the light reflecting that bothers me!! i can see where your going with it, and to an extent its working, but the light is just too dominant imo... its sooo clear what it is too... the glasses DO need a catch in them to bring life to them b ut is there a way to do it a little differently.. ie with natural light nex time??

Edit: perhaps if you had used a reflector to produce the catch? :shrug: