Focus Model in Blue [Archive]

Mart61

26-02-2008, 20:44

This lass was a little off the wall but I think she carried it off ok:

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y64/w87dhk/BlueModelFramed.jpg

Your thoughts?

Phil Wood

26-02-2008, 20:58

Great eye contact.Not too keen on the left arm position I think it would be better with the hand raised. Her head is well posed though.

Mart61

26-02-2008, 21:02

I think I may recrop to lose the arm. Looks a bit like a chicken leg...

Phil Wood

26-02-2008, 21:04

Good idea let us see what you come up with :clap::clap:

Diego Garcia

27-02-2008, 08:10

Great colour and Blade Runner eque eye make up.

radiantvision

27-02-2008, 12:12

Perspective and pose killed this photo; "Popeye" arm didn't helped. :) Head looks too small, breast is too big - proportions are lost completely... :(

DizMatt

27-02-2008, 12:20

like the lighting and tone a lot
her left arm does look odd though..maybe she's just REALLY strong or pulls pints left handed all day 24.-7

Mart61

27-02-2008, 12:24

I'm gonna check the rest of my shots of this model. See if I can find a nicer shot to work with.

Thanks for the input guys. These few shots I've posted are my very first attempt at shooting models and I have a great deal to learn, not helped by the fact that my immediate family run a mile if I go near them with a camera...