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..MD..

26-02-2008, 22:10

last one from sunday from me..

shot handheld in the crowd..:gag:
iso 200
tv 1/30
av f.8

any comments always welcome..:thumbs:

http://195.177.193.138/gallery/data/500/nec_filtered.jpg

cheers md:thumbs:

dellipher

26-02-2008, 22:11

Looks a bit soft and slightly OOF :o\
Or it does on my monitor....Sorry Dave.

Stick to the studio shots :)

..MD..

26-02-2008, 22:17

:thumbs:

thanks for your honest thoughts del..

lol " stick to the studio" :lol: :thumbs:

md:thumbs:

ed34

26-02-2008, 22:22

i'm not keen on the crop mate :shrug:

Cobra

26-02-2008, 22:23

I agree with Del, Dave, Sorry
BTW Have you run it through "noiseware"?

..MD..

26-02-2008, 22:25

I agree with Del, Dave, Sorry
BTW Have you run it through "noiseware"?

yes mate :thumbsdown: like del says ill stick to the studio style shots...

thanks for your honesty eddyboy...

krazy_horse

26-02-2008, 23:08

Hello Monkey man, i hope you don't mind me having a fiddle, it's my first time with a portrait.

Personally i like the shot hence that's why i had a little play with it in PS.

I will remove if you don't like it?

JB

http://195.177.193.138/gallery/data/500/nec_filtered1.jpg

a1ex2001

26-02-2008, 23:41

not a big fan of the above edit, the skin blemishes that have been removed make her human. For me the only problem with the origional is the eyes don't seem to be the sharpeast focus point.

radiantvision

27-02-2008, 12:11

Crop does not look right (right eyed chopped in half :), and skin needs more work; I would personally kill the make-up person for what she/he did ;) But after some serious post-processing it may be better.

DizMatt

27-02-2008, 12:19

I like the pose and the model but someone applied her makeup with a shovel and the lighting hasn't been as flattering as it could be
her left eye looks wonky too, bizarre
almost looks as if JPEG compression has been unkind to her too
shot in RAW?

Glitter

27-02-2008, 15:38

Make up is way to heavy - not the best shot i have seen - sorry

..MD..

27-02-2008, 19:18

:clap:

well thank you all for the honest thoughts thats what i wanted to hear..
if and when i try to reproduce a shot like this in a controlled enviroment... i will take it all on board and try to put it into practice..

many thanks again..

md:thumbs: