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spannerdude
19-03-2008, 15:23
I shot this because I thought it looked quite forlorn with it's broken wing badly Araldited back on. But when I look at it now I'm not sure if the glue is kind of lost somehow.

What do you reckon?

http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l106/the_spannerdude/A100%20Stuff/BrokenAngel_sm.jpg

Jonnyreb
19-03-2008, 15:47
Good sharp image, but you really needed to get all the wing in for best composition. It may have been worth making the diagonal composition stronger just to squeeze it in.

Great idea :thumbs:

AncientSnapper
19-03-2008, 19:42
I agree about the wing, but also find the tree (?) distracting - and I think it would be interesting to saturate the colours of the background more to make a greater contrast