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maddog.mark
07-04-2008, 22:06
My daughter at London Zoo, we walked along way and she needed a break.
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3022/2393195697_8758f02a3d_o.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/w99/2393195697/)
TFL:thumbs:
Lovely shot :)
Just one small thing, I would crop out the blue board on the far right as it detracts from the subject matter.
jounetsu
08-04-2008, 00:21
Lovely shot :)
Just one small thing, I would crop out the blue board on the far right as it detracts from the subject matter.
Definitely, apart from the blue, its a good one
maddog.mark
08-04-2008, 07:46
Thanks folks, hadn't noticed the board until you mentioned it. Will give it a crop.
:agree: nice spot and capture
Techno-Geek
08-04-2008, 08:33
Nice capture there mark :thumbs:
So you not living in Norfolk anymore? how comes you went to the london zoo?
Never remember going there but i must have had when i was a ickle bubby, but can't remember it
Pirate Neilsouth
08-04-2008, 08:38
Thanks folks, hadn't noticed the board until you mentioned it. Will give it a crop.
I hadn't noticed the blue until he mentioned it either :lol:
Lovely shot !
How sweet & peacful she looks.
Nice capture...
james_death
08-04-2008, 10:38
Lovelly
maddog.mark
08-04-2008, 11:44
Thanks for the comments folks. The more I look at this shot the more pleased I am with it.
Techno still in Norfolk mate, just escaped for a couple of days.
Techno-Geek
08-04-2008, 11:57
Oh how lucky you are :D
I am planning of moving out soon, don't think i'll be going london though :D :thumbs:
Charlie C
12-04-2008, 09:41
nice photo, and a good capture. agree about the blue at the right. Also i think your focusing is slightly wrong, looks to me like the front of the bench is in focus and not your daughters face.
maddog.mark
12-04-2008, 10:46
Thanks for the comments Charlie C I've cropped the blue out and the balance feels slightly wrong, so may have to try cloning it out:thinking:.
Take your point about the focus, I made the basic error of not adjusting the ISO when I came out of one of the houses and shot this at 1600:bang:. This shot has had some noise reduction applied which has made her a bit soft in comparison to the bench.. ho hum that'll learn me:)
Lovely shot. Love the contrast and dof brings her out well too.
maddog.mark
17-04-2008, 20:50
Thought this one had gone, thanks for the comments folks and the bump:thumbs:
hillwalkinggirl
17-04-2008, 20:56
Nice photo captures her mood well. Just need to remove the blue bit. Nice to see she carries her own rucksack and water bottle. It's such a good idea to get them to be independent.
Theo Moore
17-04-2008, 20:56
Thanks for the comments Charlie C I've cropped the blue out and the balance feels slightly wrong, so may have to try cloning it out:thinking:.
Take your point about the focus, I made the basic error of not adjusting the ISO when I came out of one of the houses and shot this at 1600:bang:. This shot has had some noise reduction applied which has made her a bit soft in comparison to the bench.. ho hum that'll learn me:)
Great capture. Great composition and great colour. You might also try a black and white conversion, though in this case, the colours are quite settled and well done. This would save you from having to crop, which I agree would be a bit too close on her feet.
maddog.mark
18-04-2008, 11:22
Nice photo captures her mood well. Just need to remove the blue bit. Nice to see she carries her own rucksack and water bottle. It's such a good idea to get them to be independent.
Certainly is, less for me to carry:D
They like it too, they have their stuff and they choose what they take around with them.
Great capture. Great composition and great colour. You might also try a black and white conversion, though in this case, the colours are quite settled and well done. This would save you from having to crop, which I agree would be a bit too close on her feet.
Might try a mono conversion, hadn't really considered it as an option so thanks for the idea:thumbs:
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