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Teegan
12-04-2008, 19:06
Hi all

First post on the site,please be gentle but honest ;)

http://www.flickr.com/photos/teegans/2402157894/


TIA
andy2
13-04-2008, 11:34
like it well caught well exposed :thumbs:
malla1962
13-04-2008, 11:51
Nice start, what's the U-boat? is it U-534?:clap:
sbowler579
13-04-2008, 11:58
A nice shot. You really are a die hard Leeds fan with that kitchen door. LOL
Teegan
13-04-2008, 13:53
HAHA yes it is u534
grj2000
13-04-2008, 15:18
comments on things in the order in which i noticed them ...

framing: to my eye, the crop is too tight. in action/movement shots, it is said that it's good to leave space in front of the moving object to give the sense of forward motion...a space that it can move into.

colors: muted, but nice. saturation adjustment in post processing might make them pop a bit more.

exposure: it looks like an overcast day, but the whites are blown out/overexposed. i think some post processing can help here, using curves.

gil