The Missus..!

[..MD..]

well the wife said she would help me tonight so here is one shot i am quite happy with.

practice practice practice . is all very well but you need people to model for you...

http://www.talkphotography.co.uk/gallery/data/500/art-1.jpg

thanks for looking any c+c welcome


md:thumbs:

[BOM]

Wow, I think thats an excellent shot :thumbs:

[King of Groove]

The hair on the right side of your wifes face looks bit too light in places.Pparticularly above forehead in top left of pic.

[DiddyDave]

Hi MD

I've seen this lass, she's lovely, and I don't think you've done her the justice she deserves here m8 !!!

Shooting ladies square to the camera makes them look 'square' and with wide shoulders - good if a lady-body-builder, but otherwise not too feminine. Here then, you've included far too much upper chest area, and having her shoulders on a level adds to the 'squareness'

Having her head tilt over is good though, and the lightings not bad either. I particularly like the hair movement you've captured

Here's a cropped, rotated a bit (and slight play with) version of the same image - let me know what you think

Cheers

DD

(PS - are we doing topless shots in your garage when I come down in June then! Yippee - lol)

http://www.talkphotography.co.uk/gallery/data/500/MD1_pp_web.jpg

[Betty]

Here then, you've included far too much upper chest area...

Excatly what I was going to say. Like the crop though :)

[Venomator]

HeHe ... I nearly said nice puppies without checking ... :eek: ... how rude would that have been ... :suspect: ... you've only yourself to blame Dave ... :naughty:


Your shot is a great attempt but DiddyDave's re-work is a real beaut ... :thumbs: ... just shows what can be achieved now though ... :suspect:





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[InaGlo]

Well I can definately see your improvements here Dave ... I like the lighting :thumbs:

Agree with the above comments from DD about square to camera being difficult to pull off (I do it myself too!)
Lovely edit by DD of a very lovely lady ... youre very lucky to have such a subject to practice with! :)

[Janice]

I'm not even going to ASK where the puppies are!!! :naughty: :D

Oh... looks like Ven got there before me!! :D

[DiddyDave]

You there MD ???

Any comments on the hours of PP I did on your shot (okay, 3 mins)

:lol:

DD

[..MD..]

Wow, I think thats an excellent shot
cheers mate
The hair on the right side of your wifes face looks bit too light in places.Pparticularly above forehead in top left of pic.
thanks for the comment
Hi MD

I've seen this lass, she's lovely, and I don't think you've done her the justice she deserves here m8 !!!

Shooting ladies square to the camera makes them look 'square' and with wide shoulders - good if a lady-body-builder, but otherwise not too feminine. Here then, you've included far too much upper chest area, and having her shoulders on a level adds to the 'squareness'

Having her head tilt over is good though, and the lightings not bad either. I particularly like the hair movement you've captured

Here's a cropped, rotated a bit (and slight play with) version of the same image - let me know what you think

Cheers

DD

(PS - are we doing topless shots in your garage when I come down in June then! Yippee - lol)

http://www.talkphotography.co.uk/gallery/data/500/MD1_pp_web.jpg
the wife said you have touched her up well there mate :thinking:

she likes it and so do i..
thanks

Excatly what I was going to say. Like the crop though :)
thanks betty
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Your shot is a great attempt but DiddyDave's re-work is a real beaut ... :thumbs: ... just shows what can be achieved now though ...





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rog you where lucky there then...

thanks
Well I can definately see your improvements here Dave ... I like the lighting

Agree with the above comments from DD about square to camera being difficult to pull off (I do it myself too!)
Lovely edit by DD of a very lovely lady ... youre very lucky to have such a subject to practice with! :)
thanks glo
I'm not even going to ASK where the puppies are!!! :naughty: :D

Oh... looks like Ven got there before me!! :D
naughty janice naughty
You there MD ???

Any comments on the hours of PP I did on your shot (okay, 3 mins)



DD

lol hours of pp.

thanks dave i have some others to look through from the same night i will try and do what i can to them ..

all advice is more than welcome as you know.

md

[Iiyama]

yeah I like the edited version with less shoulder and chest area.

[DiddyDave]

MD wins the...

'Most quotes in a single reply Award - 2008'

:clap::clap::clap::clap::clap:

DD

[Psmeg]

The edited version is much more flattering, both the crop and the skin smoothing have helped take a good shot and make it much stronger.

The lighting is a little hot in the top left, but that aside I can't really say there are any technical issues with it now. :)

Paul C

[SiNoO]

nice

[Cobra]

I seem to have missed this some how
Lovely model Dave if I may say so :thumbs:

[..MD..]

thanks you 3

md:thumbs:

[zarozinia]

Lovely pic of a lovely lady. I like the expression and angle you have caught and do like the cropped version .