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skullfish
27-04-2008, 19:13
These are already posted in the landscape section. If that breaks any rule I'll grab them down sharpish.

Crit on these two if you please.

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2154/2445890233_59ce86114c_o.jpg

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3119/2445891003_65c0210cac_o.jpg

I've almost got a horrible feeling that the lens isn't as sharp as it should be. (12-24 f/4 nikon, btw)

Joeİ
27-04-2008, 19:20
number 2 for me


number one could do with a slight dodge and burn to darken the sky and bring out the detail a little in the wall of the jetty ever so slightly

nice lead in and good composition on the 2 shots

skullfish
27-04-2008, 19:37
A very good shout. I hadn't even noticed there was detail in there... :lol:

Anima Templi
27-04-2008, 20:03
No 2 for me as well.
No 1 is very contrasty for me and the horizon looks a bit off (slope left to right?)
With No 2 i would have prefered a "landscape" format shot and to have lost the bottom third leaving the water to provide the foreground.
Having said that both are v good