Shauneen

[jmax]

Late yesterday afternoon i arranged to do a new shoot with Shauneen after the previous shoot not turning out the way i wanted, here are some of the best pic in my opinion from the shoot, but again im open to all comments as i want to keep improving and refining my work.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v332/jmax1984/shauneen1/2.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v332/jmax1984/shauneen1/3.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v332/jmax1984/shauneen1/4.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v332/jmax1984/shauneen1/5.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v332/jmax1984/shauneen1/6.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v332/jmax1984/shauneen1/7.jpg

B+W IMAGES

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v332/jmax1984/shauneen1/8.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v332/jmax1984/shauneen1/9.jpg

All pics were taken in RAW using:

Canon 400D
EF 50mm f/ 1.8

[JIMC]

i'm only a beginner,but the sky in the first two,blend in with her hair too much, like the other photos alot better.very nice model.But this is just my inexperienced opinion

[..MD..]

hi john some nice shots there . you should be happy with those..
nice location .

have you sharpened them after resizing ..:shrug:

only i think that they could stand alittle more just to make them pop more..

md:thumbs:

[jmax]

thanks dave and no they havent been resharpened after resizing as i thought it made them pop to much but ill post up a couple sharpened to see what you think

[..MD..]

thanks dave and no they havent been resharpened after resizing as i thought it made them pop to much but ill post up a couple sharpened to see what you think

thought not mate but if you just tweak it slightly it will come out a treat..

i would show you what i mean but you have not got your edit box ticked..

md:thumbs:

[jmax]

edit away ;)

[..MD..]

edit away ;)

nothing major mate but if you place the two together you will see what i mean


hopefully:nuts:


http://www.talkphotography.co.uk/gallery/data/500/jmax.jpg


md:thumbs:

hope this is ok

[jmax]

yea its ok man and i see what you mean but not sure if i like it :S

[Steep]

The top 75% of the last shot is a winner, the bottom bit with hands in pockets and belly sticking out lets it down a bit I think.

[jmax]

yea i know what you mean, but ive uploaded a b+w copy of the pic and think it looks alot better