Few from over the months...

[bethyboo21]

First uploads onto the forum!

Dartmoor 11th Nov 2007.
http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x25/minititch21/DSC03299.jpg

Dartmoor 10th Feb 2008.
http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x25/minititch21/100_0117.jpg

Dartmoor 10th Feb 2008.
http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x25/minititch21/100_0108.jpg

Not many i know :lol:
CC welcome...i am a beginner at photography and would like to greatly improve on what i have been doing :).
Thanks!
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[bethyboo21]

guess they aren't good enough :lol::shrug:

[Dark Star]

Ohhh patience Bethyboo :D I've a thread I posted in June last year that has no replies yet :D

#1 is a lovely shot,
# 2 is nice but I'm not sure what I am focusing on.
#3 the sky looks a little blown - the composition is good with the river running between the angles of the trees - could do with a little more saturation to bring the colours out

There are folk far more adept than me who will be able to advise on improvements

But well done on taking the plunge!

[EdinburghGary]

Give it time, ten min for a reply is expecting a bit much!!!

Anyway I like the 1st, great composition. 3rd is next for me, a nice scene but the blown sky is unfortunate.

Number 2 is my least fave, but its not that bad!

Gary.

[Toothie]

one and three are well composed, number 3 as dark star says needs more saturation for the colour and it's a shame about the sky.

[bethyboo21]

haha sorry i am a tad impatient :lol:


thanks everyone!
i tend to blow the sky alot - something i need to improve on !!
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[marky_h]

6 minutes? Give us a chance :).

There's the basis of some good ideas here. The first one is a little soft, and the main subject has its head buried, but the light and sky suggest some drama which would work well.

The backdrop to the second shot is promising, but there is too much water in the foreground, which you could crop out.

The third one is quite a nice composition - a good idea to shoot a view the river between the trees like that - but the sky is somewhat overexposed.

Keep shooting -and keep posting :thumbs:

Mark

[bethyboo21]

Will do !

Joined the National Trust on Sunday so I should hopefully be able to explor the gardens and gain a few more photographs.

Thanks all for the help !!
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[bethyboo21]

heres a cropped version of #2

http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x25/minititch21/100_0117cropped.jpg
cheers
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