Brass Neck, Balls and other Dangly bits...

[EdinburghGary]

Right,

Me and Darren (Edmond22) would love to make a wee bit cash from this togging game. We are both crap, but are trying our hardest to improve.

We have managed to get a potential client, who wants 100 basic shots of clothes and other items for a web site. She has asked for costs etc, BUT not 100% on what to do at the moment...

Anyway, feel free to tear us both a new one, honest crit now more important than ever. We have never tried these types of shots before, and have attempted to be as creative as possible without going OTT!!!

Our hope with these images, is to land this client. Any advice appreciated!



1:

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3096/2536938127_b690fe4412.jpg
LARGER (http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3096/2536938127_7ed841d574_o.jpg)



2:

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3099/2537754660_da0927edcd.jpg
LARGER (http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3099/2537754660_23f1a1cda9_o.jpg)



3:

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3228/2537754846_67ce068560.jpg
Larger (http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3228/2537754846_163e1ba0e8_o.jpg)



4 (probably the weakest one?)

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2348/2536938459_e6b59053af_o.jpg



5 (We hope to use a proper dummy, Darren this time :D!)

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3267/2537755276_46f6a03198.jpg
larger (http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3267/2537755276_d6fc0d7712_o.jpg)



6 (It was blown scalp versus his bald patch ;))
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3199/2536938729_aafa72237e.jpg
Larger (http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3199/2536938729_8608059cb4_o.jpg)


7 (not our company or logo, but we need something :) )
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2290/2536938591_db1e475751.jpg
Larger (http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2290/2536938591_860fa2016b_o.jpg)


Any and all crit / advice welcome. Total time spent on this to date, 5 hours inc PP etc. First 3 hours a lot of trial and error.

Gary, and Darren!

[Galaxy66]

1, 2, and 3 look professional enough to me 4 looks a bit lost, 5, I agree.

6 and 7, I do not like the way the models have their arms splayed.

[EdinburghGary]

1, 2, and 3 look professional enough to me 4 looks a bit lost, 5, I agree.

6 and 7, I do not like the way the models have their arms splayed.

Cheers, very happy that some of them hit the mark :) The model is Darren, his head will be growing at an alarming rate after he reads this! :)

Model, mwuhahaha.

Gary.

[EdinburghGary]

Client is happy with these it would appear!!!

Gary (Still in Mull with 5th day of GLORIOUS sunshine :) )

[Techno-Geek]

Nice set Gezza :thumbs:

Number 7 is best for me ;)