Day at the park

[jewel]

any comments or critique welcome of course.
http://www.tpfgallery.com/gallery2/d/13124-2/doe-ray-me.jpg

http://www.tpfgallery.com/gallery2/d/13126-2/123.jpg

Thanks,

Jewel

[orangepeel]

I like the 1st one, I can almost see them still swinging from the last use they had.

the second one isn't my bag but it goes well with the first one. Guess that's why u posted them together.

[daveyuk]

I like the first one as it has that feeling of being used and the rings haven't settled from swinging, I also like the way the background is just OOF really makes the rings stand out. :thumb: :thumb:

Sorry Jewels, but the second doesn't really work for me.

[DJW]

Very Arty with the 1st one & the mono works well to concentrate eye on the shapes & composition.

[minimeeze]

^^^ Agree with DJW

[Forbiddenbiker]

I like the top one, although its not quite straight, good idea with the B&W.
:)

[Fangman]

A pair of eye-catching images that one would expect to see on a modern gallery wall.

[whitewash]

any comments or critique welcome of course.
http://www.tpfgallery.com/gallery2/d/13124-2/doe-ray-me.jpg


Thanks,

Jewel

you like taking pictures of random objects doncha!

i like the first one, like the mono on it, although as someone mentioned, i get this whole aspect of it not being straight, maybe something to do with the trees!

i like it though :)

[busterboy]

The first one is one of the best I have seen you post jewel..

Well done..:)

[jewel]

The first one is one of the best I have seen you post jewel..

Well done..:)


Thanks Tim :)


As for random shots whitewash, yeah I think anything' makes for a good shot imo. Just have to see it! ;) Thanks for the comments folks

Jewel

[CT]

Well done Jewel - the improvement in your pics is great to see. :cool:

[HIMUPNORTH]

Haven't seen a whole lot of your work Jewel but the these shots are all well seen and executed.

I am not distracted by the trees in the first shot. The rings follow the line of the path and that works for me. Big thumbs!