Jamie

[chachu201]

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3064/2560585221_dcc0597d8d.jpg

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3169/2561393562_904e2d934a.jpg

Would really appreciate any comments and criticisms on the above, also any tips as regards the PP would be helpful!

Thanks very much,

Gabe

[kungfukid]

like the first best,

I find the crop a little tight on both ***'
try pulling back a bit next time.

also can you change the aperture down to isolate the subject from the background?

[kungfukid]

*** = though

[chachu201]

Yeah, I agree, the aperture should have been lowered. Also I see your point about the tight crops, thanks!