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Borats Baby
10-06-2008, 21:04
This is about my best portrait to date I think....
What do you think please ?
http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p215/boratsbaby/P1090638.jpg
antonroland
10-06-2008, 21:08
I really like the dreamy expression but those few hairs over her face do the picture no justice...:thumbs:
pearce_jj
10-06-2008, 21:49
I personally think the eyes and stray hairs need a little PP, here's a very quick bash rather rough but gives an idea:
http://sittingbourne.homeserver.com/downloads/photos/TP_Shared/portrait1.jpg
Borats Baby
12-06-2008, 14:52
Thanks chaps.
Personally, I dont think a few stray hairs makes much difference in a shot like this. Its an outdoor shot and its natural, stray hairs and all.
I agree to a degree about the eyes, but in your edited version James, they look a bit false. I realise thats maybe because it was a quick edit.
Thanks for the responses though folks.
reddeathdrinker
12-06-2008, 16:12
I can't help but think a bit of fill-in flash to light the face a bit more would have been nice...
Otherwise, well, composed, natural, and definately a keeper!!
Yes its definitely a keeper.......... but the lighting is SOOOO flat. :|
Really needs a bit of fill in flash or something.
Here's my two cents worth.
All I did was clone out the hairs, adjusted the levels, added a subtle S curve and then "popped" the eyes a little.
Your thoughts?
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y64/w87dhk/P1090638.jpg
Borats Baby
14-06-2008, 08:32
Yes, thats a lot brighter.
I wanted to keep the shot as natural as possible though, which included the skin blemishes...
ivortripod
14-06-2008, 08:54
*In your avatar :lol:
PS: Nice but I bet she won't show her mates :nuts:
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