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Borats Baby
10-06-2008, 22:18
http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p215/boratsbaby/P1090813.jpg
http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p215/boratsbaby/P1090788.jpg
http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p215/boratsbaby/P1090743.jpg
Would like some c&c please.
Particularly from those who remember some of my first posts, I'm trying to see if I've improved, I think I have, but a second opinion would help !
Thanks everyone !!
I like all of your shots, but for #3 to be titled 'Duck' - it's a little out of focus - lol
:shrug: ( I like #3 anyway )
eeverson
11-06-2008, 07:23
Nice set :)
The Damsel is Ok, but, if you can you could do with getting closer, or crop it down a bit. There's a lotta leaf and not much fly.
Daisies, hmm. Lacking in punch (levels and saturation), and the only flower that is in focus is pointing away.
The last, cant decide if it's Cow Parsley or Hemlock.
Borats Baby
11-06-2008, 09:01
^^ Thanks.
I take on board what you say Paul, however the problem with the damsel is that it was on a leaf in the middle of a pond, this was as close as I could get without getting wet :lol:
The daises, I just realised I posted the wrong pic for that one, see correct one below. :bonk:
The last, I dont know either !! :thinking:
Borats Baby
11-06-2008, 09:01
http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p215/boratsbaby/P1090789.jpg
better, there's somethng to focus on. However its a tad too cluttered. Shame there wasnt just one daisy sticking up from the other ones
Borats Baby
11-06-2008, 09:11
better, there's somethng to focus on. However its a tad too cluttered. Shame there wasnt just one daisy sticking up from the other ones
Yes, I would agree !! Thanks for the crit !!
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