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Borats Baby
10-06-2008, 22:18
http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p215/boratsbaby/P1090813.jpg

http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p215/boratsbaby/P1090788.jpg

http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p215/boratsbaby/P1090743.jpg

Would like some c&c please.

Particularly from those who remember some of my first posts, I'm trying to see if I've improved, I think I have, but a second opinion would help !

Thanks everyone !!

bazzer
10-06-2008, 22:47
I like all of your shots, but for #3 to be titled 'Duck' - it's a little out of focus - lol
:shrug: ( I like #3 anyway )

eeverson
11-06-2008, 07:23
Nice set :)

oldgit
11-06-2008, 08:17
The Damsel is Ok, but, if you can you could do with getting closer, or crop it down a bit. There's a lotta leaf and not much fly.

Daisies, hmm. Lacking in punch (levels and saturation), and the only flower that is in focus is pointing away.

The last, cant decide if it's Cow Parsley or Hemlock.

Borats Baby
11-06-2008, 09:01
^^ Thanks.

I take on board what you say Paul, however the problem with the damsel is that it was on a leaf in the middle of a pond, this was as close as I could get without getting wet :lol:

The daises, I just realised I posted the wrong pic for that one, see correct one below. :bonk:

The last, I dont know either !! :thinking:

Borats Baby
11-06-2008, 09:01
http://i129.photobucket.com/albums/p215/boratsbaby/P1090789.jpg

oldgit
11-06-2008, 09:09
better, there's somethng to focus on. However its a tad too cluttered. Shame there wasnt just one daisy sticking up from the other ones

Borats Baby
11-06-2008, 09:11
better, there's somethng to focus on. However its a tad too cluttered. Shame there wasnt just one daisy sticking up from the other ones

Yes, I would agree !! Thanks for the crit !!